[Denied][Pending] Marelon's Story

[jaejoong 2]

 Out-Of-Character Information

 

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -  changmintvxq

How old are you?: -  18

What time-zone do you live in?: -  (GMT/UTC +1)

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Yes I played many RPG like Skyrim, Dark souls and Final fantasy 7 

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: -  No

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - No

How did you hear about us?: - I Just found in Minecraft planet

What do you think the server will be like? – I hope it will be good server and excellent roleplaying experience.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes 

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: -   Make sure you don't break the server's lore

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: -  RP to chat with the others and how will be your future life

What’s metagaming?: - Using out of game resources to affect one's in game decisions

What’s powergaming?: - Not allowing people to control their own character.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Marelon_Dorlands

What race are they (and sub-race)?: -  Wood Elf 

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: -  19

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): -

 

 Marelon lived at the Malinor with his mother. His Mother is a baker,  His father is a soldier and he was killed by orcs at the camp, they was ambushed.

 

 

 Marelon is living alone with her mother they have a normal life, he never meet his father. He helped her mother with baking and try to sells breads to get some money they don't wanna be poor, he is learning some things by his mother. He is really nice to others people and Marelon get's some friends. He is pretty naive and falls with his friend words and tricks.

 

 

 Someday with his friends goes to the wilderness and they gathering some food then approuches some of groups bandits, Marelon and his friend they only run with the separate way. Marelon and his other friends run to the cliff's they didn't know what to do one bandit attack Marelon his friend try to rescure Marelon, trys to grab the bandit but he pushed him to the Marelon and he falls down off the cliff. He fall to the ground one rock fall to his head but he was unconscious for 1-2 hours. When he wakes up he didn't know  where is he from or what happened he, he only knows his name and just questions himself what happened exatly. He choose to do a adventure and to know  his past.

 

(I know I didn't make more story and I am not with good story maker but I hope it will be accepted)

 

What are they like (personality)?: -  He is a nice persone and helping people if they have a hard work

What are their ambitions?: - When he was knocked out he did't know what to do. He choose to get his memory back and to travel to the world. 

Do they have any special skills?: - He is not good with archery or sword skills he is only good with bakers 

What are their weaknesses?: -  He pretty naive and sometimes he falls to the trick by others or to his friends

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - He has brown hair, brown eyes, he is wears a grean leather armour he is tall 7,5.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - No thanks

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - http://minecraft.novaskin.me/skin/5574360282693632/Forest-Elf

Fantastic, there you go. No need to write any more - simply post this on our forums (and on MinecraftForum like it says above) and wait!

[Daisy 9738]

Denied, I gave you 24 hours to fix the errors and you did not.

 

Your definitions are a little off, or unclear. Please read up on the correct definitions on our wiki, but do not copy/paste.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours.

[Daisy 9738]

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