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[0X_Zombie_X0 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:0X_Zombie_X0

-How old are you?: 11

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT+1

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:pretty good but its not the best

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:im 11 years old i mostly play football and computer games on my freetime.i like alot of diffrent sports but mostly im in computer playing games and watching videos

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:about 2-3 hours per day

-How long have you played minecraft?:since alpha

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:well i havent played much roleplay games just some MMORPG games so this is my first this kind of RPG

-What do you expect this server will be like?:well alot of adventure fun and friends

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:well i have been playing some vanilla server but i left them because it gets boring when you play them a while

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:yep both of them

-Name the 4 races on this server.human,orc,dwarf and elf

-How did you hear about us?:from reckreations

-Did you vote?:yeah i did

-What was your favourite Law?:no racism

-What was your least favourite Law?:i cant pick one because all of them were good

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?0X_Zombie_X0

In-Character:

-Character Name:Falyn

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:0X_Zombie_X0

-Biography:[/bFalyn was borned into poor family when he was only 5 years old he was forced to war.Falyn survived but when he came back after 20 years he was pure evil.Hes mother created a barricade to evilness

but it left red strips to Falyns skin those strips were evilness trying to get out from the barricade.Falyn started to train hes archery and sword skill,after 7 years of training Falyn became a true warrior and he decide to us hes skills against the undead and ascendeds.

-Character Age:32

-Character Appearance:Falyn has black skin with red strips he has white long hair and leather armor

-Character Personality:Falyn is brave,curious and he does not afraid of enemies

-Your ambitions:help friend when he needs it dont run away in middle of an battle fight bravely until the end

-Can your character read or write?:no all hes life hes been only fightning

-Can your character mine?:yes hes has alot of strength

-Are you a capable builder?yes

-Can you wield a sword?:Yes i can

-Enjoy Farming?:not so much

-Does your character have any special skills?:]no not at all

-A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraftskinspro.com/default.as ... &link=2176

-Other Information:i just want to try something new in minecraft i think i will play this about 1-2 years if this gets accepted great server keep working on it

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and intricate character, so if you can extend your character biography, adding more depth and interesting bits so it is not just generic and boring. Make it fun and interesting! Then develop your ambitions and personality more to suit a deep and intricate character. Just make it interesting.