[Denied]Cianann1212S App

[The Real Burger 20]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -  cianann1212
How old are you?: -  14
What time-zone do you live in?: -  UTC

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: -  Yes. In minecraft and Gmod.
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: -  Yes.
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): -  No.

How did you hear about us?: - Word of mouth.
What do you think the server will be like? -  Fine,gg all round.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: -  Aye Aye Captian.
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: -  With all man. Rules are important to the structure of a server.

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: -  Playing as something that isn't yourself and reacting and acting at they would.

What’s metagaming?: -  Using OOC information IC.

What’s powergaming?: -  Forcing a action on another player or doing something you couldn't possibly do.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: -  Bojin Hate-Sayer

What race are they (and sub-race)?: -  Human-Notherner

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: -  28

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - 
Bojin was born in all small trade town in the North leading to the capital, at an early age he was exposed to the hatred and drinking in which his family did, abusing all the races that came through. His Father and Brothers would often beat the traders that came through.

Eventually after 20 years of this crap being put up with. Bojin now being old enough to beat up the traders himself even more trouble started to happen, so when the family caught word that the guards were going to jail them all, they packed their things and left fast they could,just missing the guards.

What are they like (personality)?: -  As his title would suggest he is a hating fellow. Constantly abusing the men around him aswell as the filth that people consider other races. He likes to have a good laugh and be drunk.

What are their ambitions?: -  Rid the world of the filthy races.

Do they have any special skills?: -  Swordplay and drinking, but nothing else.

What are their weaknesses?: -  Having his kinsmen  turn against him.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: -  Brow eyes, large rugged beard and rugged brow hair,usually dirty and unkept, he wears a large brow tabard and dirty brow boots on his feet.

Anything else you want to say about them?: -  Nah.

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -  http://i.imgur.com/uVDJuTU.jpg

[Maletone Blazebeard (Aqua) 130]

you have been: DENIED

I deny you because of the following reasons:

 

1. - I feel you need to flesh out your character more, you mention events in his life or:  Eventually after 20 years of this crap being put up with

but tell us those events, what was what he dealt with and major moments in his life? 20 years is a long time with many things that can happen. Do not end on Missing the guards, go further much further! also try to include more lore in your bio <3

 

2.- having his kinsmen turn against him is not a weakness, it is an event, we mean physical or mental weaknesses such as being a pyromaniac or a crippled leg, those types of things.

 

3-  please tell us your favorite rule, saying all is not a rule as it does not tell us you read the rules many people say yes but have not read the rules, just pick one you like.\

 

You may reapply in 24 hours, if you have questions or need help please pm me and I will be glad to help.

[Maletone Blazebeard (Aqua) 130]

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