[Denied]Application To Join Server

[robkillz 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -  lvl_10_gamer
How old are you?: -  20
What time-zone do you live in?: -  GMT (general mountain time)

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: -  I play quite abit of dungeons and dragons along with being a former WoW player.
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: -  No I have not.
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): -  No.

How did you hear about us?: - I was browsing through youtube to find mmorpg servers when i stumbled across a video about this server. I was instantly hooked and decided to sign up immediately.
What do you think the server will be like? -  A fun and friendly role-playing server where player interaction would be necessary to survive in a world plauged with darkness. 
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: -  Yes I have.
What’s your favorite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: -  My favorite rule is the ability to be racist to in game races which because it allows for a more realistic role-playing experience.
Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: -  Role-playing is breaking away from reality and becoming a character of your own creation. It is the ability to improve your character and live life through the eyes of someone you've made and have grown to love.

What’s metagaming?: -  Metagaming is essentially playing or speaking out of character.

What’s powergaming?: -  The interaction with a game to maximize success within the game.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Zuta

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - human

What sex are they?: -  Male

How old are they?: -  20

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): -  At the age of 6, Zuta's parents were killed by bandits. His village ransacked, abandoned, left for dead. An angry Zuta seeks revenge on the bandits. After 10 years of training and scheming, he finds the bandit village and slaughters the bandits in their sleep. He now travels the lands to find those in need of help.

What are they like (personality)?: -  Reserved, cool, dedicated, strong willed, stubborn, always ready to help (no matter what the task).

What are their ambitions?: -  To bring peace to the warring nations and live well on land that was obtained from hard work and triumph. 

Do they have any special skills?: -  Incredibly cunning and ability to use any item as a weapon, no matter how weird the item is.

What are their weaknesses?: -  Loner, hard to make friends with

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: -  Black hair, light complexion, torn rags.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - 

[Gwonam_Blaze 385]

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

- Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect. Please research their correct meanings and give us an appropriate answer. I'd recommend using this page to research: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying

 

- Your biography is very short, doesn't have much depth and is very cliche. Your parents being killed by bandits then seeking out revenge is one of the most cliche biography stories we ever see; I'd highly recommend changing it to be more original and interesting. Please add a lot more events that have affected your character, going through their childhood, early life and where they are today. Also add more detail to the events already included; Your parents dying doesn't have much impact when we hardly even know the character. Especially add more details to things such as learning skills; 1-liners are not acceptable for skills.

 

- Your biography contains no server lore. Please include mention of at least 2 cities from Anthos, especially your birthplace, and mention of at least one of the other races. If you need help finding server lore, check out our official wiki: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/

 

- You must include a 3D screenshot of your character's skin. If you need help getting a screenshot of your skin, check out this guide: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/51343-how-to-obtain-your-skin-screenshot/

 

Not a bad first attempt. You have a bit of work to do, especially on the bio, so make sure you spend plenty of time perfecting your application. Don't forget to check out the 'Application Guides' in the 'Tutorials and Guides' section of the forums if you need help. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

[Gwonam_Blaze 385]

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