[Denied]My Application

[GIMLI_THE_DWARF101 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - brolz_2
How old are you?: - 12
What time-zone do you live in?: - eastrn

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - yes
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - no
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): - no

How did you hear about us?: - friend
What do you think the server will be like? - lordof the rings
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - ooc

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - where a character acts out as another charachter

What’s metagaming?: - a person that is OOC and use what he learned out of OOC to his advantage

What’s powergaming?: -  A guy who tries to become over power to rule the role playing session

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Vintic

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - halfling

What sex are they?: - male

How old are they?: - 34

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - Vintic lives in Summerset Shire. It was a very tiny village. the family of Vintic was very poor but they still pushed through there life. Soon Vintics family died by sarving. so he had to live with his friend Zing he was very hyper and fun Zings family took care of Vintic and Zing. Soon they called eachother a "brother from another mother" the people of the town liked the boys. But soon they had to depart.  Vintic became a good theif but not the best.and zing became fighter but died. Vintic had no hope for caring abouthisfamily so he decided to try to become the best theif.
What are they like (personality)?: - friendly poor greedy

What are their ambitions?: - be the best theif

Do they have any special skills?: - sneaking

What are their weaknesses?: - close combat

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - has red button jacket green shirt brown hair wihte vneck no shoes green eyes un boutounde jacket pointy ears.

Anything else you want to say about them?: -

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - my skin

 

[Gwonam_Blaze 385]

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

- You confirmed that you have roleplayed before, yet, failed to tell us how. Please explain what roleplaying experience you've had.

 

- 'OOC' is not a 'rule'. Please give us an actual full rule from our rules page here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/page/info/rules

 

- All of your definitions are incorrect. Please research their correct meanings any way you choose and give us their true definitions, however, remember not to plagiarise. I'd recommend using this page to research the definitions: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying

 

- Your biography doesn't make any sense and progresses far too quickly without giving much detail. How did things get so bad for your characters family that they all died except for him? Who exactly is 'Zing' and how long has your character known him for? Why did they 'have' to depart the village? How did Zing finally die? Please give plenty of details on all of the events in your character's life from their childhood up to where they are today.

 

- Your biography doesn't contain much server lore. Please add at least 1 more location from Anthos and mention of at least 1 of the other races. If you need help finding server lore, check out our official wiki here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/

 

- Please expand on your character's personality; 3 words doesn't really tell us much. Give more details on how your character acts in society.

 

- Your skills and weaknesses need more detail. How exactly is he good at sneaking? Why is he 'weak' to close combat?

 

- You need to include a 3D screenshot of your character's skin at the end. If you need help getting one, check out this guide: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/51343-how-to-obtain-your-skin-screenshot/

 

- Your entire application is full of spelling and other grammar errors; far too many to be considered 'acceptable'. Please check through your application several times before posting and use some sort of spell-checker to ensure you've made as few mistakes as possible.

 

You have quite a lot of work to do, but I'm sure that if you try hard enough you'll make a brilliant application! You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

[Gwonam_Blaze 385]

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