[Feedback] Achan-Chatla

[Tentoa 3161]

So as you may know I recently started up a character named Achan-chatla. That I have been given one week to test-run by staff and I am using this week to gather opinions and criticism for Achan itself and the way I roleplay the character. If you're un-aware of what Achan is I'll give a brief description. He is an eldritch creature made up of a many eyes and tentacles that covers himself in yellow silk wrappings to disguise that fact. For those of you who want a better look at him I'll provide the orignal link: here. 

Now I'm going to add a poll on whether or not he should stay and I am begging all of you to tell me how I might improve upon Achan's roleplay or to point out thigns you find I'm doing wrong and how I could improve that.

[ToenailTickler 290]

Whut

[Graceful Bucko 65]

Mate, everything you're doing with that Char is super grand.

[Sneaky 189]

Not up to us man. Up to you! Don'tet the community influence what you want!

[Wobbajack 119]

From what I have seen so far, you should definitely keep this character!

[Samler 1565]

I can think of one little improvement you can do! While RPing him, do bring out more details as how he looks and stuff, so more details is all I can say! Good luck! ;)

[Rhia 936]

Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.