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Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -  Ocelots12
How old are you?: -  12 turning 13 in a couple of months
What time-zone do you live in?: -  austrailan eastern standard

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - I havn't played roleplay before (in a fantasy sense)
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - yes just one its a type where you can go to war, invade, live peacefully, have a nation, ect
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): -  i have done one other application: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/109375-application-for-isabelle/#entry1028709

How did you hear about us?: - I saw a screenshot from a mod page on the mc forum and it looked cool I asked for what the server was called & he gave me this link to this webpage

What do you think the server will be like? -  I think full of magic & nice players
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes rules are there so we don't make anyone annoyed or worse
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - you need to use a rp friendly skin

 

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: -  roleplay is playing pretend or roleplay is acting out something with other people

What’s metagaming?: - metagaming is using ooc information like looking at their name & saming hi sam when you only just met them

What’s powergaming?: - power gaming is atacking another with out leting be able to fight back for exapmle if you came up against an orc & you emoted, attacks orc & rips head off that would be power gaming

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Isabelle

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Race: elf Sub-race: half wood elf & half high elf

What sex are they?: - female

How old are they?: -  40 (elves live longer so 40 would be like 20 if she was human)

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - Isabelle was born with a tail a fox tail her mother & father were devestated they kept it hidden.

 

Isabelle's mother & father kept her secret safe for years (shes now 25 which is like 15 human years) shes been taught how to hunt, clean & cook the animal she catches, how to fight with a bow not a sword (she taught herslf how to use a knife in a fight) one day a high elf came round & isabelle didnt know that he was coming & so had her tail out the elf saw it & she was bannished for 60 years.

 

Isabelle found that she loved traveling round & now travels looking for someone to teach her magic she has some skills pickpocketing for cash & items she need to survive & live.

 

Her mothers name is Rosie her fathers is Leviathan (levathan is a high elf but fell in love with a wood elf (rosie) & used his magic to change his skin, hair & hight rosie has no idea her husband was once a high elf) Isabelle does not know any family other than her mother & father.

What are they like (personality)?: -  cheerful, nice, helpful, keeps to herself most of the time

What are their ambitions?: - to learn magic & raise a family

Do they have any special skills?: - can weld magic but she needs to learn how to control it first

What are their weaknesses?: - if her fox tail hair is cut she will be bound to whoever cuts it untill they die or they let her go.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - looks i bit like a high elf but with wood elf qualitys, light coloured skin, brown eyes, hair same as fox tail, fox tail brownish but more light in colour, ears are pointed like a foxes but like an elves too

Anything else you want to say about them?: - Shes great with a bow, rubbish with a sword, great with a knife & needs to have a wizard or wood elf to teach her how to use her magic

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - click :  http://imgur.com/k0MqHHU,m2v58Q1,VfiXg7i#0 there are 3 images there back, front & ears

[cj_scout 305]

Your app has been. . .

Unfortunately I must deny this for a few reasons.

-You only got your metagaming and powergaming definitions partially correct, please specify.

 

-You need to work on your roleplaying definition.

 

-You must include server lore in your biography, like events, places, people, etc.

 

-Elves are not considered mature until around 80, so anywhere around or above that would be a better age.

 

-Your character can not have a tail, fox ears, or any qualities other than what an elf would have. 

 

-You must learn magic RPly, you can not simply say you have it.

 

-Your grammar and spelling needs major improvement, your app is very difficult to read with constant errors.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours. Please PM me with any questions.

[cj_scout 305]

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