[Denied]Epicblade's Application

[EpicBlade 6]

Before I start I want to tell you that for some reason my computer didn't want to paste the application thing so I hade to do it myself (also this is like my third time writing this, the refresh button is evil!)so I'm going to do this a bit lazy, sorry!

 

Out-of-character info

 

What is your mc account name: EpicNinjaOne

How old are you: 12

Have you ever Rped in mc before: no

Have you applied before: no

 

How did you hear about us: I used to watch Candle's lord of the craft episodes when he still made them

Have you read and agreed to the rules: yes

What's your favorite rule: No blackmailing, no harassing

Do you understand combat and villain rules: yes

Are there any rules that confuse or make no sense to you: no

 

Definitions

 

What is Rp: it's when one changes his/her behavior to assume a role, to act out a character's feeling, action, emotions, etc.

 

what is metagaming: It's when one uses OOC knowledge for an advantage

 

what is powergaming: It's when one acts like he or she is op, godly, unstoppable, etc.

 

IC info

 

What's your characters name: Richard Thorenstein

What race are they: Human Northerner

What gender are they: Male

How old are they: 21

 

Biography:

Richard was born with a older brother, mother, and father. when Richard was young his mother and father threw him and his brother out, leaving them out to die in hard conditions. Eventually Richard and his brother made there home in Winterfell. As they grew older Richard's brother became interested in joining the military and training in the way of the sword, he taught Richard in the way of the sword on the way too, but as Richard grew older he was more interested in the was of the shadows and stealth which later turned him into a thief, at this time Richard's brother was part of the military and was embarrassed by his brother's decision, usually made fun of by the Winterfell guard's. One day this lead them towards a argument where it split them apart, Richard stayed a thief and his brother was part of the guards. One day Richard was walking along and heard a story of the ascended, this caught his ear and fascinated him about them, he dreamed of becoming them, but he always knew he would never become them, for he has chosen the road of thievery, but he did study them well. But to this day he can't forget something, a night that changed him completely. one night he was doing what he does best when suddenly there was fighting happening, he came to check it out and was shocked that it was an undead attack, he quickly sprang to battle, he took one of his swords and sliced the undead like butter he went totally berserk, but when one undead caught him off guard and shot a magical bolt that would of killed him, but a guard jumped in front of him and sliced the undead but he also took the bolt, when he went to the guard to check who his savior was, he was shocked that it was is brother, his brother said in a weak voice " Richard...I can't do anything...I can't be the hero I wanted to be... but you... you were always better than me...please Richard... be a hero...to... the human race" then his brother died, Richard started to cry " I will brother, I will save them" at that moment he knew what he wanted to be, a hero, and now just a regular hero, a ascended hero.

 

What are they like: Richard is sly and sneaky, got plenty of tricks up his sleeves and can get out of a sticky situation quickly

 

what are there ambitions: to become a hero and ascended

 

What are there skills and weaknesses

-Skills-

sword

stealth

lockpicking

pickpocketing

~Weaknesses~

exposure

light

magic

 

How do they looks:

dark brown hair, blue eyes, light skin color, leather mask over face, 6 feet and 2 inches tall

 

Please show us a picture of your character

 

Good luck and thank you for signing up for this server

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[gam 386]

Your application has been...

Here is why:

• I want you to expand on your metagaming and powrgaming definitions. Maybe add some examples.
• You need to use server lore in your writing, not Game of Thrones lore. Please fix that.
• There was a bit of powergaming in your biography; where you chopped up countless undead like butter.
• The undead have not been around on LotC since Aegis, well over 100 years ago. It is not possible that your character could have experienced that at the age of 21, and little to no humans are still alive from Aegis, due to death by old age.
• I'm going to ask that you try to use the correct app format. If you really cannot get it to work and you've tried everything, it's not that big of a deal, but if you can get it to work please do. You can find the application format here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/110675-the-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/

You may re-apply in 24 hours. Feel free to PM me with any questions you may have.

[gam 386]

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