[Denied]Deathkid176S Application For Lotc

[deomonkid 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
 
The simplest section of the application. Answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit more. Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! 
 
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -  deathkid176
How old are you?: - 13
Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: -  yes on persistant worlds
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): yes https://www.lordofth...st-application/
 
How did you hear about us?: - BaronVonDietz
What do you think the server will be like? -  an adventure
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: -  yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: -  meta gaming and power gaming if those were aloud this server would be a disaster!
Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?:- yes
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):- i understand all but i have anotherr question what is the reason you have to do this "ello mate" because why not just write then when youre ooc you do (( like allways))
 
Definitions
 
These terms are a major part of the server and in a few of our rules. Please define them so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers or check on our wiki, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?: - acting as your character and letting it take control
 
What’s metagaming?: -  Using information That You learned out of character for your in IC 
 
What’s powergaming?: -  Rp then not let the character you are fighting or whatever else you are doing respond
 
In-Character Information
 
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that you follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
What’s your character called?: - Roerk
 
What race are they? (and sub-race if applicable): -  Human
 
What gender are they?: -  Male
 
How old are they?: -  18
 
Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include server lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, ect. Most lore can be found on our wiki.): - Roerk was a young human boy who lived in the Town of Ekren. He and his brother Itsuku always loved stealing baked goods from the local baker. One day The kings military was marching through the city, Roerk saw the shining armor and the gleaming swords, and he knew he wanted to become a knight.
Three weeks after his seventeenth birthday Roerk set out on an adventure to the Kings Castle and it took several weeks. When he reached the castle Roerk told the king he wanted to be a knight, the king laughed and told Roerk that knights train for months to become knights. Roerk knew the only way to become a knight is to train. after 1 year and 3 months, Roerk became a man at the age of  
eighteen. At the ceremony of Knightship everybody except him became knights , he was extremely devastated. He rode his steed back to his city. When he reached Ekren, he was in shock to see that is house was burned down. His family was missing too! Roerk cried but then heard a cough from the burned logs. It was Itsuku,
he was alive and well. he treated him with herbs and made him rest. that day Roerk swore that he would protect all people until the day he dies.
 
What are they like? (personality): -  Friendly/sneaky
 
What are their ambitions?: -  to find his family and protect people
 
Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): - Roerk can 
 sense when an enemy is near by and can feel the pain people have Roerks weakness is getting shot by a bow its hard for him to know when an arrow is coming towards him
Give us a description of how they look?: -  blue eyes brown hair white shirt blue overcoat sword on back 
 
Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin:

http://www.minecraft.../3865004/roerk/

[MamaBearJade 2090]

 

 

Alright, sadly I must deny this thread. While there is a lot of potential there are some points I would like you to address.

 

- Your definitions are good, but I would like to see them expanded.

- Your bio lacks any lore. I would consult the Wiki to see where we are as well as several bits of the forums to get caught up.

- Your bio is a bit, cliche with the missing/dead family and destroyed village, I would suggest maybe delving deeper into the character to bring him to life.

 

You may reapply in 24 hours from this post. Should you have any questions feel free to send me a Private Message and I will be more than happy to help you.

[MamaBearJade 2090]

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