[Denied][Pending] Diossy Application

[DIOSSY 0]

Posted 26 October 2014 - 10:31 PM

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: diossy98

How old are you?: 17

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes - https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/118379-diossy-application/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: MG'ing and PG'ing

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? saw it in the role play section on a server list website

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you act as/in a role which is different to your own personality, as in you act like this person or thing, you talk like them you would assume that you were them at all times.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when you act out of characterly, as in you use some sort of knowledge which you yourself may be aware of but your character is not.

What is powergaming?: powergaming is where you act in ways which benefit yourself/that are bias to you and are unfair to the other person that you may be RP'ing with.

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Vallei

Character’s gender: Female

Character’s race: Wood Elf

Character’s age: 30

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.)

Born within nature surroundings(forests) of Athera, most specifically Malinor, Normandor. Vallei was brought up by her mother(who was a well known poet) and father (who was one of the best fletchers in the realm of Athera). Vallei's father was one of the sharpest shooters back in his day where he used to hunt in the forests and made some of the greatest bows and arrows for many of the wood elves. They all lived among a giant tree in Asulon where most of the community acted as if they were family. Throughout the upbringing of Vallei, her father always made sure to teach her, if anything at all, the most important teachings of Malin.

Vallei trained and trained with her father determined to make her parents proud. From a young age Vallei always showed great potential and discipline. It was due to this star potential that Vallei decided not to follow the path of becoming a Dryad due to her wanted to follow her own path, and to challenge fate. Everyone respected her decision in not becoming a Dryad as they could all see too, how good she was with a bow and arrow, as well as her outstanding communication with her surrounding, nature and animals. And so, Vallei, the girl named after the sacred water, stepped into an adventure that would be a challenge never to forget...

Personality Traits: Confident, Loyal, Honest, Disciplined, Peaceful

Ambitions: to be able to reign peace among every race and stop all war of Man vs Man and Man vs Nature

Strengths/Talents: Amazing knowledge passed down from her father causes her to be specially gifted in Archery and Nature, her beautiful and elaborate singing was taught to her by her mother, who used to sing hundreds of elven poems to her as a child.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Inability to cast magic due to being trained in archery and nature survival only , weakness of fighting and war - she will only fight where fighting is needed due to her peaceful and loving nature.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

http://imgur.com/VR0ryoC

5ft 6

40kg

[Overland 349]

  Your application has been put on pending, please make the requested changes within 24 hours to be accepted. Once you have completed the modifications to your application, please private message me.

• While your biography does contain a fair amount of lore, I would like to see a few more town names or nation names.
• Your skin is too pale to be a Wood Elf, Wood Elves have skin that ranges from tan to various shades of brown.
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Feel free to contact me with questions or concerns you may have with your application or the server in general.

  Your application has been denied, please reapply after 24 hours with the requested changes. 

• Your biography improved a fair bit, but I believe it is best you use town names from more recent realms, which are found here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Anthos and here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Athera
• Please do not steal skin images from the wiki, without even changing your actual skin to suit it. I recommend you go and find a new skin for the time being - or change your character's subrace so you can continue to use your current skin.

Feel free to private message me with any questions or concerns you may have regarding your application or the server itself.

[Overland 349]

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