[Denied]Application

[DominusZork 0]

out-of -game information:

my minecraft account name is DominusZork

im 15 years old

im not quite sure what PG-13 means

as far as i know i havent aplied for this server before

he rule i agree with the most is the no hacking rule

there is no that doesnt make sense to me

i found out about this server by looking at google for a RP server

 

deffinitions:

what is roleplay: roleplaying is playing with a storyline and a made up character

what is metagaming: metagaming is using tactics to accomplish things that you shouldnt be able to accomplish

what is powergaming: powergaming is focusing on achieving the goal instead of roleplaying

 

in-character information:

my character is called Dum'Sur/ a male/ a kharajyr/ 15 years old

 

little Dum'Sur was born in the fringe in 1463 a year before the drought after the illness of the khorvad's grip. little Dum'Sur would probably have starved to death if his parents didnt hear about the portal leading to Thales.

in Thales he happily grew up to the age of 4 when the great winter came and he and his parents had to move to Athera along with the others.

in Athera he grew up to the age of 15 almost being a grown up. at this age Dum'Sur decided to travel around the world as a courier leaving his parents in petrus.

 

personal traits are agressive, shy and patient

ambitions are hunting, traveling and fishing

strength and talents are not really much

weaknesses and inabilities are also not really much

 

appearance:

[Overland 349]

  Unfortunately your application has been denied, please reapply after 24 hours with the requested changes.

• PG-13 refers to content that is recommended for those over the age of 13.
• Please expand upon all three of your definitions, as they are all incorrect. You may use Google to find out their meanings, but you must write then in your own words on the application.
• The name "Dum'Sur" is not a lore-friendly name, please change it.
• Your character must be over the age of 18 in your application.
• Please expand upon your biography. The wiki http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ contains lore that you can use in your biography.
• Please expand upon your personality traits and ambitions, as they are basic.
• Every character has strengths and weaknesses, please expand upon them as well.

Feel free to private message me with any questions or concerns you have regarding your application or server.

[Overland 349]

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