trexation 14 Share Posted November 7, 2014 Out-Of-Character Information Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: 'trexation' How old are you?: '15' Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): 'yes' Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): 'No' Have you read and agreed to the rules?: 'yes' What’s the rule you agree with the most?: 'the combat rules are through, and makes combat sound...real world Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? my friend deutchland63 told me about your server. Definitions Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! What is roleplaying?: Playing as if, you are in that time period. fallowing a style set by the server What is metagaming?: meta-gaming is taking things from say the forums about a battle, and then starting to prepare 5 days early What is powergaming?: doing things that are way to overpowered for the situation, like say to kill a nation leader, using a super heated blast of plasma, in the 1700s In-Character Information Character’s name: Treckhims Johan Character’s gender: Male Character’s race: Human (White) Character’s age: 37 Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Born in 1460 Treckhims Johan was always a bright lad. always interested in the arts of smithy and architecture, when he was just 8, his mother died in child birth, leaving Treckhims and his loving father to fend for themselves. After his mother's death Treckhims never really recovered socially. As he grew older his genies grew, but he never shared it. It was 1480, Treckhims was 20 years old, with a successful metal workshop, Treckhims set out for a high place in society, he began to draw out his brilliant military forts plans, he designed many of the best ideas the world had see. Some of his fort ideas are still used today. as Treckhims grew older he started to develop a rare illness. As he was riding along a bridge on his horse, he had a lapse of motor control and fell, 20 feet into rushing waters. Personality Traits: Smart, and very bright, but in his logic, sometimes fails to be kind and considerate Ambitions: I am one who leads and plans to build in military might, and is out to better defend my homeland ( I want to found homeland security....Jk) Strengths/Talents: Skilled in the magic of redstone and building Weaknesses/Inabilities: Treckhims was never much of a poet or writer Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere): http://gyazo.com/c48def64df0024d6508c7f6210ad85d8 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overland 349 Share Posted November 7, 2014 Unfortunately your application has been denied, please reapply after 24 hours with the requested changes made. All three of your definitions are incorrect. You may use Google or another search engine to find their meanings, but you must write them in your own words. 'White' is not a subrace, sub races can be found here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Humans Your biography is lacking server lore, aside from dates (just to note, the current year is 1480.) The wiki http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ contains all the information you need, such as town names. I would also suggest you remove or change the part where he designs some of the best ideas ever regarding forts Please expand upon your strengths and weaknesses, as they are not really balanced. You did not describe your character, and your skin is a little too modern for the server. Feel free to private message me with any questions or concerns with you have regarding your application or the server. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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