[Denied]Application From Stefancraft11 To Get Whitelisted

[Stefancraft11 1]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Stefancraft11

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: dont hack 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? a video on youtube

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: you play with a storyline 

What is metagaming?: a game with strategy, action or any method

What is powergaming?: a game with a goal

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Argis

Character’s gender: male

Character’s race: wood-elves

Character’s age: 22

Biography : he want to be for ever young and shoots arrows like lightning. he dreamed always to be a archer and maybe now he will....

Personality Traits: cocky and always want to shoot everything with an arrow

Ambitions: hes poor but believes he will be rich a time

Strengths/Talents: good sight and realy likes to parkour on trees

Weaknesses/Inabilities: he's afraid for the most creatures...

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): he is 2.3 meter and he's very light

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://imgur.com/zSWskCc

[MamaBearJade 2090]

 

::Definitions::

Too short, please expand on all three

 

::Age::

22 is very young for an elf, you may want to be older

 

::Biography::

Way to short, expand and please incorperate lore

 

::Personality::

Expand

 

::Ambitions::

Expand and give actual ambitions please

 

::Strengths::

Liking to parkour on trees is not a strength

 

::Weakness::

add more weaknesses

 

::Height::

2.3 meters is too tall for any elf, let alone a wood elf. Please read their lore and adjust accordingly.

 

Overall your application lacks any effort. You need to take the time to put some thought and feeling into your character. Please expand on everything. Thank you. You may reapply 24 hours from this post

[MamaBearJade 2090]

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