[Denied]Eagle536's Application

[Eagle536 1]

OOC

What’s your Minecraft Account Name? Eagle536

How old are you?: 12

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/112651-eagle536s-app/

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/119332-eagle536s-application/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  Using roleplay to get into areas that are not accessible via Minecraft mechanics

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Both sides must agree on using either text-based combat or mechanics-based combat. If both sides disagree, then you must use the default which is mechanics-based combat. There must be sufficient roleplay leading up to any combat scenario.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Just roaming around the internet for good rp servers

 

Definitions

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you portray the role of a different person, assuming the attitude, personality and actions of the player making different connections and enjoying yourself

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when your character doesn’t know something in-game but you know it out game and you use it to exploit that person or thing

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is when somebody tries to exploit or find loop-holes in the rules to further progress its character in skill, power and wealth

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Character’s name: Gorlan Cider

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 24

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): When I was 7 my parents were killed during the plague and I was left to die then a man, whose name I still don’t know to this day but he said this “you have the strength needed in a young boy to do what needs to be done” those words are still ringing in my head. Then it happened… I was 15 and I and my Master was the road headed north from the town of Aldersberg. When were ambushed, and on the coats of the soldiers was the one thing we didn’t want to see…

A blood red oak leaf, I turn to my master and looked at him. He seemed very wary, and then I asked him what was wrong. Then he told me the tale…. In the first days Athera a group of men wearing red cloaks came to the land preaching about blood and war, saying this kingdom would be split in 2 and he meant literally split in 2. Everyone laughed at these men but my order back then took these men seriously. Thinking that they were up to something grave, and then it started. The High Elves were overthrown in 1475 and with it rumours of mysterious men roaming the streets. That’s when my order took notice and kept a watchful eye on these preachers. The story was told and the stage is set.

We were riding back to home when we stopped overnight in Oakhearth at the inn to get some rest. Then strange noises I heard were ringing in the streets so I get up to investigate. Then it all happened I was rolling around the hallway fighting with a mysterious man, everyone in the Inn heard the commotion and came running up with swords in hand. But they were too late on the floor was a bloody boy and a man lying dead next to him. From that day onwards Gorlan worked along with the final words his master said “bring peace to the 5 kingdoms you must then their intentions will be realised” then he was dead. Now Gorlan is now a helping hand finishing what his master started bring peace to the realm of Athera

Personality Traits: Cautious, funny, loving, loyal and faithful

Ambitions: to bring order and peace to the 5 Kingdoms of the Athera

Strengths/Talents: Archery, Silent movement, knife combat and horse riding

Weaknesses/Inabilities: when some close is killed or slain he goes into a state of mourning and only cares about revenge. Then there’s where he can barely follow orders and goes his own way on his own word not his superiors

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5ft 8 and 90kg

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/3325677/cloaked-ranger/

[MamaBearJade 2090]

 

::Bio::

I am sorry to say your bio makes absolutely no sense. Please straighten it out. Have a parent or an older family member proof read before reapplying with a bio

Parents killed by orcs/bandits/plague is cliche

"Order of the Blood Red Oak Leaf" ?

Who is the boy and mysterious man that you supposedly killed?

Why do you go from first person to third person?

"Five Kingdoms"?

 

::Personality::

Too short, please expand

 

::Ambitions::

Please give real ambition

 

::Weaknesses::

Needs to balance out with strengths

 

::Appearance::

Please expand

[MamaBearJade 2090]

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