[Denied]Alfred Valornis Application

[CheekyNolan 5420]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: FNolan

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: no trolling

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): rape, how can you rape someone in minecraft?

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My friend, who plays on he server, told me to play on it.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: to play as a fictional character.

What is metagaming?: For example, you watch someone play a game. You see they use the same moves constantly. Therefore, when you later decide to play against him you use moves that you know can beat him. Instead of having an even fight your foreknowledge of his favorite strategies gives you an advantage.

What is power gaming?: People who power game are people who try to do or use something that is impossible to compete with, making the role play unfair. It is also forcing something upon another person.

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Alfred Valornis

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 35

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): I am a Heartlander, like my father and brother, born in a house hand built by my father and brother on a snowy mountain surrounded by forest. My mother died giving birth to me and I have always felt he prefers my brother, Andreth Valnoris, to me.

 

My brother left home at the age of 24, leaving me with our father. After a few years it became clear I was a worse version of my brother in my fathers eyes. To prove myself to him I joined my brother in the army. During my time fighting I have developed a skill for magic and might look to find a career in that department.

Personality Traits: Intelligent, strong and very determined on my goals.

Ambitions: To prove myself to my father and to make something of myself.

Strengths/Talents: Hard Working and good at weapon combat as well as some natural skill at magic.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Weak knee due to being shot by an arrow.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): I have dark hair, almost black, with amazingly blue eyes. I have a slight beard and always have a smile. I am 6 foot 5, so are normally taller than most people, and have muscular arms, legs and torso. I am average weight.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

http://imagizer.imageshack.us/a/img538/6843/9dAHVD.png

[Readicti 902]

• I'll start by answering your question on the rules. This is a roleplay server and as such we have to ban the roleplay of rape and other sexual content on the server. Rape- it's not cool in real life, it's not cool on the server. Just don't do it.
• Expand on your roleplaying definition.
• Your metagaming definition appears to be plagiarized. Please change. If you plagiarize again, you will be banned for a certain amount of time.
• Your biography is short and lacks server lore. You can find appropriate lore on our wiki page.
• You cannot know magic before coming to the server. You can try to find a teacher through roleplay or on the forums if you do wish to learn.
• Your ambition is impossible. If your father doesn't exist on the server, it's impossible to make him proud of you.

[Readicti 902]

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