[Denied]Calebthecaveman's Application

[CalebTheCaveman 7]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: CalebTheCaveman

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:  Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Once the choice of combat has been decided both parties must agree to stop.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Your rules say no cybersex but you say if they're over 18 it's okay, is that IC or OOC?

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: fournier5 told me about it.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Taking on a false persona and acting how the entity would.

What is metagaming?: Using out of character information in character.

What is powergaming?: Forcing roleplay actions on another player.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Klorg

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Orc (sub-race Uruk)

Character’s age: 23

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Klorg was birthed during the war between the High Elves and Orcs in the Silver City. His father a low-ranking military Orc, but proud to serve for his race. Klorg's mother was a house wife and cared for the young orc and raised him to believe in his race's superiority. Although born in the arms of his parents they were not there to see him reach adulthood, Klorgs father died during the war of the Silver City and his mother left the city and never returned, Klorg was raised his uncle. The death of his parents made Klorg a bitter and anger child, and he often spent his time alone. Although his was meant to be a leather working, Klorg wanted to used his anger to slay those who spoke against an Orc over-rule. The uncle of Klorg did not believe in him, he told him that he would never make anything of himself and often told him that he will never be that of a wargoth, and this only strengthened the anger in the young Orc. Klorg began hating his uncle and resenting all other beings, including himself for not being the best he could.

 

When Klorg matured into adulthood he spent his time blacksmithing instruments of war such as axes, swords, and sometimes daggers. When he wasn't crafting war arms he was either drinking or being a free agent assassin. Klorg began pushing the idea to the community that he was worthy of being a militant. He would travel spreading the message and doing small raids for money and short temporary shelter. He often was denied jobs for he was quick to anger and would lash out verbally at his customers. When he was accepted for hire his room was locked as most feared if he decided to kill there was no stopping him. Due to his dangerous missions Klorg vowed to train so he could not fail. Now he roams the lands looking for a kingdom to settle and grow stronger.

Personality Traits: Short-Tempered, dull-witted, brooding, cruel, unforgiving, hateful,and manipulative.

Ambitions: He wishes to become a Wargoth.

Strengths/Talents: Military actions, skilled blacksmith, manipulative, and combat 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: dull-witted, loud when moving, , quick to anger.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 7'3", 319 pounds, dark-red skin, dark-red eyes, four tusks, blood stained hide tunic and loin cloth.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

-You need to expand upon your power-gaming and meta-gaming definitions. Maybe use an example?

 

-You need to expand upon the lore in your biography. Where was he born? Where did he live after the war against Haelun'or?

 

-Your character's biography is filled with inconsistancies. Why would his house-wife mother die randomly? Why did she live the unnamed city?

 

-You cant apply as a character and have him do villainous actions in your biography.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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