[Denied][Pending]Next Attempt To Apply

[Jirka_H 0]

My next attempt to apply

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Jirka_H

How old are you?:13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/121937-white-list-apply-2/ , https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/121904-white-list-apply/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Hacking

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Because, I like LOTR and I search realy greate server

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: assuming the role of a character to take part in an ongoing story writing process.

What is metagaming?: taking knoledge you learned out of character, and using it as your character.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is doing something that your character is not capable of, or roleplaying the effect of an action, and not an attempt.

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Titanius Ocelkuj

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:Kharajyr

Character’s age:36

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):I'm 36 years old, measuring 1.7 meters, I was fatter characters, I have a black coat and my name is Titanius Ocelkuj. I was a blacksmith in a remote little village. From the village I never left because I had no reason to.Everyone I helped, but one day in age od Aegis the village was looted by unknown hunters who hijacked my friends.

I teach combat and defense. I do not know anything about the outside world because I never needed to come out. I am ready to face any danger and so we set off north to seek villages plunderes.

Ambitions: Find a pub where free pouring and find beautiful girl and marry her. Get into a war.

Strengths/Talents:I can very well use a sword, because I am blacksmith and I work with swords every day.

Weaknesses/Inabilities:I have no experience with the outside world because I never came from the village.

And I sorry for my English, I am a Czech. Thanks.

Jirka_H

[Tirenas 677]

You have 24 hours to make the following changes. Please feel free to contact me once you have updated your application and/or if you have questions.

 

• Your biography lacks server lore.
• The typical revenge story is very cliche, please fix that aspect of the application.
• The definition of powergaming is incorrect.
• Your character's ambitions are incredibly minimal.
• Your character's strengths and weaknesses need to be elaborated upon.
• You cannot start out as an expert in any sort of skill.

[Tirenas 677]

This applicant has not fixed the aforementioned issues within the allotted time.

[Tirenas 677]

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