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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: graypwn2009

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: That breaking server lore is breaking the rules.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My friend told me about it.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting as a specific role in a world different from ours.

What is metagaming?: Using something outside the game to help you win in-game.

What is powergaming?: When you make your character unnecessarily good. Such as a wizard that is a knight and a farmer. You are making your character harder to kill/ or maximizing his abilities in every single way.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Graev

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Wood Elf

Character’s age: 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): I am Graev Son of Azzorath, brother of Ezzorath. My father Azzorath was a guard. He fell in battle to the High Elves. My brother always talks about the changes that our father went through during that six year war. But, I was too young to remember it. I barely remember our house. I can remember how small it was, I just don't have a vivid image of it.I just remember my brother and I gathering and hunting. Because of my age, I could not hunt. So I read books. I became smarter, and stronger. I was  still too young to wield a bow, but my brother taught me. After my father died, my brother had to hunt to keep us alive. I was still learning how to shoot, but I was naturally skilled. He and I became as skilled as any elite archer in the land, and so we were able to survive. We lived happily for many years, but my brother got into some trouble.

He loved a woman, Amelia, and her father despised him. I did not care about his romantic life, but I did care on what happened next. I hear an axe cleave our door open. A mad man, Brutus the father of Amelia, charges in. My mother could not react... She was decapitated and died immediately. He looked at me and tried to kill me, but my brother threw a knife into his back. Brutus cried out in pain. He tried to swing at my brother, but Ezzorath was too fast. Ezzorath rolled to grab his sword, but Brutus, thinking on his feet looked to me. I felt a rage inside of me. I looked at my mother's body, and reacted with anger and hate. I grabbed a candle holder and blocked his axe. I kicked his kneecap, shattering it. He swings again, but I could only react quickly enough to get my cheek sliced. I grabbed the nearest chair and smashed it over his fat head. He squealed like the swine he was. Ezzorath thrusts his sword into his throat and killed the high elf.

 

When the Capital Laureh'lin, Leyulin was reinstated, Ezzorath and I dreamed of adventure and longed for a new life in Laureh'lin. To stay alive we had to hunt and steal what we could, but we had to do it to survive. 

We want to stop this untruthful life.

But discovering it will be the hard part.

 

Personality Traits: Quiet, Calm, Collected, Loyal, and stubborn.

Ambitions: 

Strengths/Talents: Skilled with a bow, great farmer, good tamer, good gatherer, good at acrobatics.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Not suited with swords, short temper, when in a rage does not think clearly.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Average height, brown hair and brown eyes, 110 pounds.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): 

http://gyazo.com/b92aca65f3783526e5153ec129b8d7ce

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• Your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions while correct need expanding, if you need help or have questions on these don't refrain from sending me a pm!
• Your biography needs to include racial lore on where you were born which can be found on the wiki here http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• Please add passive skills your character is weak within (These include farming,blacksmithing, fletching, farming, leatherworking, etc.)

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

[James 425]

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