[Denied][Pending] Awesome89078 Playing As Bedic Deathmar [Second Application]

[Knightlevent 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! 

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: awesome89078

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes, https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/123569-application-of-awesome89078-playing-as-bedic-deathmar/#entry1189208

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with the application, it keeps all the trolls away!

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Everything is great!

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I saw it on a youtube video!

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is playing a certain character to get an atmosphere not felt in your everyday life.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when the player acts out of character, or his story does not back up his characters. He will use knowledge not known by his character but by him.

What is power gaming?: Power gaming is forcing actions upon a character which is not realistic, in the view of minecraft you can not just walk up to someone and kill them and take their stuff.

 

In-Character Information 

Character’s name: Bedic Deathmar

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Wood Elf 

Character’s age: 523

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): 1492

 

Bedic Deathmar was born in 974 in a small town in of Melinor, Athos. He was born to a father and a mother. His father was a noble warrior, who fought in fierce battles. His mother was a normal mom, she stayed at home and fed and cared for everyone. 

   Oriona was born, Bedics little sister. Bedic wasn’t the happiest kid, he thought that his sister would attract all the attention, which she did. She soon grew up to be a teacher.

   Bedic was inlisted into the army which his father commanded. He trained for months of archery and sword skills. Bedic started to pop out unlike the others, he was exceptional with a bow, and ok with a sword. But Bedic did not want the life of war.

   Bedic ran away…. He soon became a adventurer and became lost exploring around Asulon. He lost his way and was stranded in a desert for 5 years!

   He met “Lost Wanderer” a famous Elven explorer. Apparently LW was lost when he was 762, and is know 767 years old. “LW” As Bedic soon called him taught him many skill. Like cooking, and farming. These skills were made very useful while they lived together. LW had a shack on the water, a cozy home not to big or not to small. This home proved to be Bedic's learning center for years to come. LW was once a soldier just like Bedic and ran away for the same reason. Bedic felt a connection and was loyal to LW ever since. Bedic once said “ LW is a better father than mine could had ever been!” Bedic was 13 then and was still very young. LW kept on pushing him to his fullest, which Bedic soon saw it was for the best!

  As we fast forward in time Bedic trained and trained with LW. He refined his skills. Soon LW knew he was ready. Bedic was 73 when he and LW went back to his hometown of Melinor, but soon became under siege. LW toke his own life for Bedic’s own. Bedic knew this was a sign he had to go. But did not want to leave LW.

  Bedic is 523 years old and has been living in Athera for 450 years. He has been doing nothing with his life till he got a letter which read… “This is LW, I am not dead there is hope.” Bedic didn’t know what this ment but he knew he had to do something with himself. All the practicing he did with LW he had to put it to use. 

 

  Present day

Bedic is know out adventuring like when he was young. He is ready to start a new life and tell his tales once again. Will Bedic stand the test of time?

 

Personality Traits: Determined, well-mannered, excellent at warfare, friendly, talkative, and easy to get along with.

Ambitions: He wants to start all over, explore again, and meet new people!

Strengths/Talents: Archery, cooking, and farming

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Hand-to-hand battle, swimming, and melle skills.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): He is 5'8 and 175 pounds. His brown long hair blows around in the wind, his blue eyes sparkle in the moonlight, and his grins melts every face he sees. He seems to be quiet the warrior, and of an aggressive type, but he is of an gentleman stature and won't fight if needed to.

[Jonificus 2760]

You have 24 hours to rectify the point(s) below, message me when you have done so or if you have any questions or concerns.

 

• Malinor fell in Anthos, we're in Athera.
• Please expand upon Bedic's survival in the desert. If you could explain what happened to the "Lost wanderer" that Bedic grew to love that'd be appreciated.
• Please explain how he became excellent at warfare.
• The current year is 1497.
• No elven child would ever be enlisted into the military at the age of 7.

Good luck, and I'll see ya later!

[Jonificus 2760]

You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed, if you have any questions or concerns feel free to contact me.

The reason(s) for your denial are pointed out below.

 

• The beginning of your biography is rather unlikely as elven children/teens can be enlisted into the military.
• You have yet to explain how the young Bedic survived in the desert for 5 years.

[Jonificus 2760]

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