[Denied]The Lotc Server Submission

[PlatinumLego 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: PlatinumLego

How old are you?: 17

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: 1. Global Rules; we do not tolerate the following on any Lord of the Craft service: Hacking

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): What is Constantly Being toxic?

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?  A friend told me so he might have a friend to role-play with.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting as a character and staying in character, leaving all sense of reality behind and becoming that character.

What is metagaming?: Taking knowledge obtained in an unpleasable way in game or IRL and translating it into your character, so they also know.

What is powergaming?: Denning another the opportunity for input or action, controlling the outcome.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Natial Asuges

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 24

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Natial Asuges was born to a life of tragedies. Natial was born fatherless, for in 1476 when the Undead invaded Kal’Agnar, Natial’s father fought for the safety of his human kind and conquest though with his entire trail he fell. Natial never knew his father and was later born in 1476 later that year in Hanseti, though sadly more tragedy struck two years later and his mother fell ill and soon died, at one of the raids from the undead, she sacrificed her life for Natial’s safety. Now an orphan Natial at the age of two was put out on the streets, he had nowhere to go and no one to turn to but, a stranger was coming through the town and saw this little Northern baby and took pity on the poor soul, adopting him. This Stranger was a Mountain Dwarf, a veteran of the Trench battle of the Crossroads and the First World War of Anthos, and a skilled and working blacksmith. Natial grew up Mastering the Art of Blacksmithing and hunting in Northal, under his respected mentor and guardian Grisalbrand Smiith.

As a blacksmith Natial was able to hear of the tails told by the many adventures that came through his town in the Great Kingdom of Urguan. Was Natial grew older he became a great blacksmith, to a point where even Smiith complimented his work. One day as Asuges was working a traveler came to the shop, and ask “can you tell me where the one they call Natial is?”

Natial replied, “I am he, what may I do for you”

Stranger “I am here on behalf of Artimec Camoryn, one of the great Wood Elven people, he seeks a sword of unmatched quality.”

Natial “SURLY… you jest sir why come all this way do not the Elves have blacksmiths of your own?!?!?!”

Stranger “He has requested you to make it only, the reason to myself is unknown……….I was told to tell you this: ‘Natial Asuges I ask you to forge this sword for me a sword paralleled by none, a sword made from the finest materials and forged in the ways of old. I ask this of you and you alone to do this. There is no rush to this order though ask for its completion by the year 1526 on the 11^th full moon. All fees shall be paid with a hefty sum’ this was the message I was sent to deliver.”

Natial “and if I refuse?”

The stranger quickly draws his silver sword from his side and septs in to close the distance between himself and Natial, “Then I am to slice of your head” Says the Wood Elf.

Natial “I shall have your sword done in due time then” he says in disgust.

Stranger “We shall be waiting” the stranger steps back and sheaths his sword, turning around he walks out as nothing has happened, and rides out into the country.

Natial Asuges later that day learned that the ways to forge a sword in old had been all but extinct, with the secrets taught only in one place the Dwarven Cave city. The next day Natial packed his belongings and began his journey to forge a sword of fate.

Personality Traits: Strong, stubborn, Quiet and Kind

Ambitions: Live life as if it were his last day every day, and create the Greatest Sword that was ever made.

Strengths/Talents: Talented Blacksmith pays very close attention and fair hunter

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Bows couldn’t hit the Broad Side of a Castle, Slow in response of fast moving situations speaks his mind way to easily

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height: 5.7 Weight: 146 Short Blond Hair, Blue Eyes, often has dirty hands, and has some strength from working in the forges most days.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

http://imgur.com/JthqJea&JTFlttE#0

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

-Your meta-gaming definition is confusing, and seems to be wrong? Or its just severely filled with typos to the point that it is wrong?

 

-Your powergaming definition is incorrect.

 

-Your entire application is strewn with typos and errors.

 

-Artimec Camoryn never really looked for blacksmiths to make swords (he actually uses a bow.) , nor ever sent hitmen to blackmail people. Art was/is actually a pretty decent guy, and I'd suggest that if you wish to use a specific character doing actions in your application that you'd PM them and ask if thats ok.

 

-You never really specify whats 'the old way' of making swords, or how in the world your character was able to learn how to remake them... Nor is there really 'an old way' dwarven or not to make a sword in Lord of The Craft.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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