[Denied] Milnil1's Application

[milnil1 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Milnil

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:That there is no hacking

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I went to minecraftservers.com

What is roleplaying?:  when you are playing in the role of someone who isn't you

What is metagaming?: an action or a strategy game

What is power gaming?: its like trying to achieve a goal in a game

Character’s name:Eragon

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:27

Biography: Eragon was born and raised as an orphan and his family was killed in a fire. He was raised on the outskirts of a town in a small hut by a dwarf. He was trained in the arts of Arcane magic and started at age 5. One day a dragon had flown over their hut and was destroying the town when the dwarf had gone to help. Eragon was only 8 and was left alone while his only friend or family had gone to fight. When he was lost in the wilderness he found the dragon and it took care of him. The dragon ended up being captured by dark magic users. Eragon found himself in a village after days of walking when an boarding school took him in and taught him how to write and read. After he left he wandered to find an adventure.

Personality Traits: Nice, Friendly, Optimistic, but is short tempered

Ambitions: To find out who he really is

Strengths/Talents: Running, Reading, Magic, and he is good at building houses or crafts

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Lifting heavy objects

Appearance: 6 ft. 5 in.  157 pounds, black hair, brown skin, and brown eyes

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[Jonificus 2763]

 

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

• Metagaming and powergaming definitions are wrong.
• The orphan story's cliche.
• You can't learn any magic at such a young age nor can you apply for a character with knowledge of magic.
• The biography lacks lore.
• The biography is awfully short.
• The ambition is too vague.
• Your skin is not suitable for this server nor your character.

 

Please check out our wiki and the new player guides if you haven't already, they're a great tool for applicants.

[Jonificus 2763]

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