[Denied] [Pending] Explosiveberries' Application! (Edited)

[ExplosiveBerries 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: ExplosiveBerries

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes, https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/125193-explosiveberries-topic/#entry1204802

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I like the rule where the Administrators and moderators have absolute authority, quote on quote "No means no".

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Trading Items? Would I be banned for that?

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I went through Youtube, and found this!

 

 

What is roleplaying?: Fictional characters made by you, and controlled by you. You can control how the character thinks, talks, and move.

What is metagaming?: Knowledge that lets you have the advantage. A scenario for example, you're on skype with a friend, playing a game where you're not suppose to know your enemies' location, your friend is spectating and tells you it.

What is powergaming?: Making your character overpowered, ignoring limitation. Likewise, they would make long sentences with the advantages weighing heavy on there side, instead of there enemy's.

 

Character’s name: Gal'ye Silver

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human - Heartlander

Character’s age: 20

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):  Gal'ye was an unhappy baby. Their parents had financial problems, but they still cherished Gal'ye.The Great War was not looking good, 

everyone in town had heard about the Battle of King's road and were already deathly afraid of the Undead.Life started out bad in Whispering Isles, Father and Mother didn't have any money.

They owed money for buying food and such and now a debtor was to come to their small shack today.If they weren't going to pay, they'd be hang... along with the baby.

 

       Before the debtor came, Father was in search for a peaceful home for Gal'ye

Luckily, he need only to search in Whispering Isles to find the home for the baby.

The home...was called Fire Clan.The Father went back to join the Mother in their fate, and soon died.

 

       Because of the Great War, the Fire Clan escaped along with the baby and moved to New Terriko.Gal'ye spent his child hood days training himself to be a better man by training with swordsand learning how to take care of himself. The dwarves welcomed them, but only lasted when Gal'ye was ten,where the same thing happened again to New Terriko. Again, Fire Clan escaped because of their brilliantleader, Malzel.

 

       Lastly, Gal'ye spent his eight years in Asulon before becoming an adult. The sword trainer that had trained him told him his life past, he accepted his past and moved on to meet his ambitions.

 

Personality Traits: Leader, Ambitious, Loyal, Promising, Trustworthy, and Honest

Ambitions: Taking on the Undead, killing the beings that took New Terriko.

Strengths/Talents:Extremely talented with swords, Good timing, and two decades of survival experience.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: His rage lets out the animal in him and he can't control it, Can die easier with other types of weapons if it's not related with swords, and doesn't have much knowledge about urban cities.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):  Tall, intelligent, and a powerful and deep voice. Height = 6'1 Weight = 215

 

How my character will look = http://imgur.com/p2Xadar

Edited April 15, 2015 by ExplosiveBerries

[Jonificus 2763]

 

You have 24 hours to rectify the point(s) below, message me when this is done or if you have any questions or concerns.

 

• Which Great War are you referring to?
• Gal'ye is too young to have lived during Malinor's existence.
• "Bandits/orcs/undead killed my parents" is a rather cliche backstory.
• Travelling is a vague ambition.

 

Good luck, and I'll see ya later!

I suggest checking out our wiki or the new player guides if you haven't already, they're a great tool for applicants.

 

 

 

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

• 24 hours have passed.
• Gal'ye is too young to have lived in Asulon.
• Biography makes little sense as there is/was no such thing as the Fire Clan or New Terriko.

Please check out our wiki and the new player guides if you haven't already, they're a great tool for applicants.

[Jonificus 2763]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.