ABC145's Application 3rd Try!!! [EDITED!]

[ABC145 1]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:ABC145

-How old are you?:11

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: EST (eastern standard time) USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a tall person and I have Brownish black hair. Also i have Blue eyes and a oval head. I have no job yet since im 11 but i do start school soon.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:7 days a week.

-How long have you played minecraft?:For about 10 months.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I understand the when you RP you take on the role of a character, sorta like a second body. And once I saw this server I understood that my skills of RPing will be tested to the fullest! Also ive been RPing for about 6 to 7 months.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:A amazing RPG server with lots of crisis, betrayal, and war. (little peace too :))

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I didnt leave any server, but yes i play on others.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:Yes.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Orcs, Elves, Humans, and Dwarves.

-How did you hear about us?:Youtube.

-Did you vote?:yes.

-What was your favourite Law?: No griefing.

-What was your least favourite Law?: Not really any laws I dont agree with.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? ABC145

In-Character:

-Character Name:Jacqur_The_Bold

-What is your Race?:Orc

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: ABC145

-Biography: Jacqur was born in a in a very messy household, his mother not caring for him at all. His father was quite the amuser, being the most decorated orc of them all. So Jacur was quite rich, although ugly people didnt care about that, they cared about his pure bravery! Jacur was one of the most bravest Orc ever to live! But one dark day his father and mother were assassinated, which made him very heart broken. So he joined the army of orcs to demolish those who oppose him. He devoted himself the the army, that until he perishes, he will always fight for his kingdom!

-Character Age:20

-Character Appearance: Jacqur has a green, Hideous face. Also he has a ruffled Leather tunic for clothes, and his hair is a dark black color.

-Character Personality: brave, shy at times, loves to kill for the sake of his family. Also he is courageous, mean if angered, and secretive.

-Your ambitions: war, loyalty, defending the orcs, and helping the other nations.

-Can your character read or write?:read

-Can your character mine?:yes

-Are you a capable builder? no

-Can you wield a sword?: yes

-Enjoy Farming?: a little

-Does your character have any special skills?:no

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/orc/

-Other Information: Even if this post dosent make it, I'll keep trying for it! It looks like a AMAZING server!

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and indepth character. That means you need an awesome biography and also indepth analysis of your characters ambitions, personality etc... You character is the entire point of this game, you need to put a huge amount of effort and detain into it. It is basically a second person. Make it fun and interesting but not ridiculous, and always within the lore.