[Denied] [Pending]Application

[Just_Me 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Storm_Breaker7

How old are you?:14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes, I understand.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):No, I have not applied before.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes i have read and agreed to the rules. 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:I agree with the rule that says you can't get any refunds.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):Not being allowed to pm GM's about problems.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:A friend showed me the server.                                                                                 

What is roleplaying?:Role-playing refers to the changing of one's behaviour to assume a role, either unconsciously to fill a social role.

What is metagaming?:Metagaming is any strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset.

What is powergaming:Powergaming (or power gaming) is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems with the aim of maximising progress towards a specific goal.

Character’s name:Argan Aendar

Character’s gender:Male.

Character’s race:Mountain Dwarf

Character’s age:53

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.) :Argan was born in 1447 in Kal'arguan. Argan lived with his family(His Mother, Celephinnor and his Father Norbal, and His younger brother, Cargon.)in a good sized house in the center of Kal'arguan. His Father was a very fine blacksmith, and taught Argan to blacksmith as soon as he was able to lift a hammer. Norbal always wanted Argan to be a blacksmith, but he wanted Cargon to be a great philosopher. Argan and Cargon had a sort of rivalry going between them to gain their Father's attention, but they soon grew out of it. Argan did turn out to be a very great blacksmith and Cargon a great philosopher, but Argan decided He wanted to help his people in another way, He wanted to join the dwarven army, He went to enlist in the army and began his training soon after. In the training camp, he learned to fight with and without a sword or staff and also learned to use a bow quite accurately. After many years of service, filled with many battles and skirmishes, He decided to leave the army to find a quieter life maybe settle down and have a family, But thats not what happened, instead He found adventure in Athera.  

Personality Traits: Argan is a very hard worker and will do anything for what he thinks is right,He is very suspicious of foreigners due to the many battles and conflicts with the many factions, He is also very sarcastic and gets angered quite easily.

Ambitions:To explore all of Athera, and to one day have a family

Strengths/Talents: Very good with the bow and the sword. Also very strong from working in a smithy, also a very good scout

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Although he is able to read, he can not write very well,He cannot run very fast due to an injury to his leg from battle.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):He is an average looking dwarf, he has red hair like most mountain dwarf,buthe still wears his armour from when he served in the dwarven army, He also keeps an axe slung across his back.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): 

[Supah 334]

Your application has been

 

Denied

 

While you did make the changes I asked, all three of your definitions were plagiarized. Since this is your first offense, it will only be a warning. Next time you will be banned for plagiarizing again.

 

You may reapply in 24 hours, feel free to PM me if you have any questions.

[Supah 334]

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