[Denied] [Pending] Aruson Arcana-Beeflover112

[Aruson Arcana 1]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Beeflover112

How old are you?:13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yea

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):Nope

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yep

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:not go out of character

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):i understand every rule

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?Youtube

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:acting as a particular role

What is metagaming?:metagaming differs from strategy in that metagaming is making decisions based upon out of game knowledge

What is powergaming?is a style of interacting with games or game like systems with the aim of maximising progress towards a specific goal

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Aruson Arcana

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:High Elf

Character’s age:318(was frozen)

Biography  I was born on the outskirts of Forlindonto to a pair of poor but loving parents.The people there treated us cruelly always because we were high elves.When i was just four we were attacked by a pack of bandit orcs.My father killed three orcs but there were far too many.Soon my father was killed and my mom raped and left to die.My father covered me in his wolf skin he received from his father and told me to be silent before he died...When the orcs were gone I ran faster than ever to a not to faraway town called Junton.The guards didnt believe me and put me in an orphange thinking i was a runaway.They will pay i i said to myself everyday.In the orphange I was beaten everyday and nearly died once.I learned how to fight and when i was fifteen i cound defend myself from the cruel teachers we had.When I was seventeen I ran away from the orphange but just before running for Junton I saw the guards that didnt believe so I....I ran way than.A farmer found me nearly starved to death between Orondon  and Jurn.He took me under his wing and taught me the ways of a farmer.He never asked me about my past or how a high elf was born on the outskirts of  Forlindonto.When I was thirty two, with two kids and a beautiful wife I went for a walk in the woods stumbling against a rock i saw a dark cave,I decided to venture in.There was ice everywhere,it was freezing.My father knew some magic but never taught me magic.I would love to summon a flame right now.When i turned a corner i saw a dark figure in a mancing cloak that shouted "ROS DUNA" at me.He started running at me.I tried shielding my face but the frost reached me I saw ice beggining to pour out of his mouth,but it was too late.

 

"Where am I?"

Personality Traits:Aruson was always the smartest one in the orphanage

Ambitions:Aruson has ambitions to once rid the world of the people he opposes

Strengths/Talents:The farmer that took him under his wing taught him alot of secrets in farming,he has an expert level in farming and collecting herbs.

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Aruson has a very high temper,back in the orphange he would punch anyone who would say or do smething that he didnt like

Appearance:Very bright blue eyes,musculary built by doing hard famr work,very tall like all high elves

My Skin http://www.minecraftskins.com/newuploaded_skins/skin_20130824013221197973.png

[Jonificus 2761]

 

You have 24 hours to rectify the point(s) below, message me when this is done or if you have any questions or concerns.

 

• Your definitions are awfully vague, the metagaming and powergaming defintions are incorrect and doesn't tell me much.
• I see a lack of effort in the application overall, such as the cliche biography with no server lore in it, and the vague answers on personality traits, ambitions, strengths and weaknesses.
• You forgot to add a screenshot of your skin.
• Note: Don't make a new post when put on pending, simply edit your application :)

 

Good luck, and I'll see ya later!

I suggest checking out our wiki or the new player guides if you haven't already, they're a great tool for applicants.

 

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

• You plagiarized two of the definitions. This is against the rules and you will only be warned once of this, do it again and you can be banned from applying from 1-3 weeks depending on how many definitions you plagiarize.

Please check out our wiki and the new player guides if you haven't already, they're a great tool for applicants.

[Jonificus 2761]

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