[Denied] (Whitelist Application) Dylanslywolf V2

[Dylanslywolf 15]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Dylant2000

How old are you?:15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yep

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):yep once https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/126449-pending-whitelist-application-dylanslywolf/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yep

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: dont break roleplay

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):nope

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? i was searching for a roleplay server 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:Acting as a specific person / acting in general

What is metagaming?:Out of character knowledge used in roleplay

What is powergaming?: the act of using roleplaying in pvp , but using words such as I killed Joe / it should be /I attempted to kill joe so they can react to the roleplay

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Dante L. Hawk

Character’s gender:male

Character’s race:Farfolk

Character’s age:17

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):My name is Dante L. Hawk. My story begins with my mother. On a hot afternoon , my mother was cooking a banquet with the rest of the village.We had recently brought back a huge harvest of crops, livestock, and meat. Normally at this time the village would have already ate, but they had come across a highlander By the name Talion L. Hawk . He was a little ill from a venomous snake bite, which was kinda funny considering the rest of the villagers have built of an immunity to venom overtime. Although a snake bite can not phase them High doses of venom are still very dangerous. I guess one snake bite to a 

foreigner can be pretty deadly. When Talion came to he was tied to a tree. The villagers are very protective after all our village motto is "Stay together, Survive together, and Die together". There was talk around the village that Talion should be executed for the safety of the tribe , however the final decision would have to anonymous and would be decided in 2 days. My mother being the kind women she was had decided to feed Talion. From the stories i hear thats how they fell in love. Talion was in love with my mother and she was in love with Talion. Finally the day of reckoning had arrived and it was decided that Talion was aloud to live because of the love between him and my mother. A couple months later and i was born. Both my mother and my father thought they could lived together for the rest of their lives, but live is very devastating A well known group of murders and scoundrels were approaching the village I belive they were prisoners of duchy the Petrus who were released after the surrender . Everyone had been preparing for the attack, but Depression was in the air. They had numbers, alot of numbers. We had thought we were all going to die, but at that moment the the men of the city had stood up to protect the village rushing toward the Scoundrels. At this moment my father stood up and said "im going" my mother had wished for him to stop and said that we have a child to raise, but my father replied with this "Stay together, Survive together, and Die together" . Soon after  the battle had begun. surprisingly From what i heard my father was the strongest there and killed the majority of scoundrels. The Battle was over , but many had lost there lives that including my father. Returning back from the battle was one man the son of the village Chief Tarzan. From the stories my fathers last words were "Protect my family." they were heard by Tarzan the last survivor who had fulfilled my fathers wishes and started to raise my family. Tarzan was like a big brother to me he had raised me for most of my years training me for the harsh world out there. At the age of 15 I had to say goodbye to Tarzan he was venturing to distant lands.For the whole next year my mother taught me how to cook. It was the most wonderful thing in the world to make something delicious that everyone would applaud you for making. It was one of the best years of my life. At the age of 16 I started to take care of my mother , she was contagious with  a virus of unknown origin. As the years went by it only got worse and worse , intill it was my moms turn to say her last words. "Dante, Fulfill your dreams, find companions, and learn the meaning of "Stay together, Survive together, and Die together". Since then ive  visited several places. my first stop was Oren  i figured i should of visited it since its part of my races origin.While visiting this city i Started to get in deep thought about world problems I looked at the kingdom before me and all i could think is that the king had been assassinated honestly it kind of put me in a shocked state. Sadly i didnt get to meet Guy de bar. I highly respect this man i hope one day i will be able to auctually meet him face to face. Ive been thinking about elves and the stuggles they are going threw. there struggles are alot like mine , but i guess bad things happen to everyone. I can only wonder what will happen to this world in the coming years and honestly im scared to think that all my dreams can be demolished along with the lives of millions of people. I cant only hope for the peaceful years. Ive also heard that Tarzan has had recent development in the military hopefully I can see him before  anything happens. And more importantly i hope he doesn't turn into the vary thing that destroyed are village. Ive decided that if anything important comes up soon ill try to my best to make peace. Its hard for me to chose sides so i wont for now. For now i can only hope to fulfill my dreams and meet companions like my mother wanted. my name is Dante L. Hawk and i am both exicted and scared of the future.

Personality Traits: Kind, but Brave

Ambitions:To Become a cook, and Journey with companions

Strengths/Talents:Very adaptable body,Cooking, and decent fighter

Weaknesses/Inabilities: unaware and cautious, Possible virus spread from his mother

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):Normal face, Tall, Thin

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

 

 

 

[Fireheart 2777]

You have been placed on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

 

Applicant, I am pleased to see you reapply with a completely different biography. However, I find that your story is a typical story that I would hear from an applicant. A way to convince me that it is your own would be to apply Server Lore to your application to make it more unique! I suggest you look at the Human Sub-Wiki. Within Wiki you can draw on information that can help you. Seeing how your character is only 17 years old he most likely grew up during the most recent wars which involved, as a hint, King Andrik Vydra. I do not require that you use certain names, but you could refer to time periods or significant events around the time Dante's village got attacked. I would also request that you add a bit more information at the end of your biography about Dante and what he is doing with his life. An easy way to do this would be to refer to places he might have visited which could be placed you find in the Kingdom of Oren's section of the Human Sub-Wiki.

 

In addition to your biography I would like you to fix your Personality Traits. Being Shy and Brave sort of clash with each other and I find difficult, in the knowledge I have learned about Dante, to be both. You are more than welcome to explain in your biography why Dante is both sky and brave if you care. Otherwise pick and choose one while removing the other.

 

I wish for you also to redefine your Weakness  On-Edge and unaware are also traits that make little to know sense. A possible solution to that would be to state that he is unaware and cautious. The choice is yours as far as defining your own character's weakness goes.

 

In addition to that, I request if you so kindly could give me a screenshot of your skin during day time so I can view it more easily!

 

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and/or fix your application based off the information and request above. Make sure you make all edits on this application, Good Luck Applicant!

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

This application is being denied solely due to it not making any progress. Private messages were a productive factor, but the applicant has hence failed to make correct changes in the period of time given. I request that the applicant make the changes requested to the application and then repost.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advise and issues with your application that I have stated above.

 

[Fireheart 2777]

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