[Denied] My Application V2

[Burstinatrix 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Burstinatrix

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): I understand

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes I have applied once, here is the link, it was awful and I didn't spend time on it and made it good to show how much I want to join the server https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/127269-my-application/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I have read the rules a few times in my head and understood it 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyber bullying, the reason for that is because the biggest thing I hate is bullies.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Nope, I understand every rules that was on there and promise not to break one of them

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found out about Lord of the Craft by a youtube video, ever since I watched the series I fell in love with the server as I love doing roleplay

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplay is pretty much acting act a particular role you have been given or wanted to do

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is pretty much a game universe out of the game itself

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is pretty much a interaction with games or game-like systems. 

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Zane

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 24

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

23 years ago..... in a stormy winter night, there was a happy couple feeding a very small and cute baby, trying to calm the baby down, the baby's name was "Zane". Now, when the storm got stronger and stronger Zane started to cry harder and harder, so his mum and dad (Alexis and Jayden) tried to calm him down. 

 

"Bang! Bang! Bang!"

 

The door was being slammed, at first Jayden and Alexis thought it was the lightning hitting the door, until they heard a voice shouting "Open the door! if not I will kill you!"

Jayden and Alexis looked at each other and before they could do anything, the door was slammed open. Out came a very tall and ripped man grabbing Jayden and Alexis and leaning them to the wall saying "Where is it!?"

Jayden said "We're not telling you!"

When Jayden said that he got a knee into the ribs, then the man said "You're coming with me"

As the man was pushing Jayden and Alexis out, Zane kept on crying, then "Bang!" the door slammed shut, leaving little Zane on his own crying, no one knew how he survived and how he kept his life going, but soon we are looking to find out.

 

15 years later, Zane has been going around Athera looking for the man who took his mum and dad and looking to get revenge and save his mum and dad and find out if they're still alive or not....

Personality Traits: 

Adventurous 

Fearless

Optimistic

Intelligent

Confident

 

Ambitions: 

To save his mum and dad and find out the whole story to why it all happend

Strengths/Talents:

Sailing

Climbing

Horse riding

Running

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities:

Not very strong

Backstab

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Brown hair

Blue eyes

Brown beard

5'10"

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://prntscr.com/78r931

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both incorrect.
• Your biography is very short and needs more detail as well as lacks any history on where he was born.
• Your biography lacks server lore, along with where he was raised and born. You can find this on the wiki (here) http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• How did your character become good at his strengths, and why is backstab a weakness. (By backstab what are you referring to?)
• Your backstory in which you swear revenge to save your parents is very cliche, I would recommend changing it to make it more unique. 

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

[James 425]

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