[Denied] Mr_Minecraftfs Application

[atajoseph 0]

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:  Mr_MineCraftf

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes, https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/127437-mr-minecraftfs-application/#entry1224032

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: That cyber bulling is prohibited 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No I understand all of the rules.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? ChesGod and TheNexusEclipse told me about it.

 

Character’s name: Miyko Yu

Character’s gender: Female

Character’s race: Dark Elf

Character’s age:  71

Biography :

 

Growing up in Athera alone was difficult. Many of the kind people of the land let Miyko spend the nights into their homes. When the war behind the High Elves and Wood Elves make her upset. She wanted to run and hide. She tried to help defend the land but she was to young and weak to help. This is when she decided to begin her training. Most of the Dark Elfs didn't like her because of her odd skin color. 

 

After  the conflict was over she begin trying to become friends her with many of the Humans. She thought this would work because they are always saying how nice she is. She was very interested in this species in particular because they are very kind. The guards, though, were not as nice when she tried to enter the city of Petrus she was declined. She thought that the reason they did not accept her is because of her weird skin color and the fact that she was an elf. his is when she realized that she needs to rethink her idea of living with the humans. She went to the Princedom of Malinor were she was accepted and began to live her life the way she wanted to.

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is playing a game as something or someone other than yourself.

What is metagaming?: Playing a game using out of game information.

What is powergaming?: Using actions in a game.

 

Personality Traits: Friendly, Hard working, curious and reasonable

Ambitions: I want to become one of the best breeder on the server and help my community in any fights/wars that may appear. I also want to help create many chicken and other farms.

Strengths/Talents:  I am very fast and kind to others. I am willing to help others that may need tools/weapons.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: I am very unexperienced in farming and need to be taught how to speak to others. However I am willing to learn the knowledge I don't have.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 6ft 4, 160, 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

http://imgur.com/p2MrkrI,y6NQBeW

 

http://imgur.com/p2MrkrI,y6NQBeW#1

[Fireheart 2777]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed you on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

Your definition of Roleplay is incorrect, please refer to the link here for guidance.

 

Your definition of Metagaming is incorrect, please refer to the link here for guidance.

 

Your definition of Powergaming is incorrect, please refer to the link here for guidance.

 

Please lengthen your Biography out to make it longer. I am looking for around the size of two well sized paragraphs. You can incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character.

 

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki can be found here. This link will help you get started in incorporating something from certain places, to wars and significant events. Certain parts such as your information and dates are incorrect. We are in the 1500’s not 5000’s for example.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and/or fix your application based off the information and request above. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

Applicant failed to make all requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advise and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Fireheart 2777]

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