[Denied] Application

[AlexAgain 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:AlexAgain

How old are you?:14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyber-bullying because it makes it a not nice experience for the person on the end of it, which also may effect them in real life.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I watch a YouTube Video

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: To Play A Game as a character which is not alike the person who is playing the game

What is metagaming?: Meta gaming is playing the game in a differant way than most players do it (Breaking the meta)

What is powergaming?: Power gaming is working towards a particular goal like maxing out abilities.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Kirito

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 16

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): At the young age of 6 Kirito was brushed aside by his parents due to the arrival of his new young brother Daiki. He soon ran away from his family and left for a village in Asulon and meet a man named Eiichi. He was a very wise man and taught him how to fight well. He grew very close to Eiichi. They were so close it was as if they were father and son. Kirito developed as a swordsman and a person and was winning in lots of the contests in Asulon. After his 10th birthday he was The local champion of sword fighting. But he was always looking to get stronger. By the age of 15 he decided to move away from Eiichi and the village, but to always visted every now and then. This is where we join Kiritos story just after his 16th birthday. 

Personality Traits: Brave, Athletic, Loyal to the people he trusts, Ambitious.

Ambitions: To become the greatest swordsman there ever was.

Strengths/Talents:Swordsmanship, agility, Parkour

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Long range attacks ie. archery.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5ft 9, Lean but muscular, fit, dark black hair, light skined.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): Sorry, but I have windows 8 so I am unavailable to send it to you. However you can always contacts me via skype (SandyThePro) or Twitter (AlexAgain01). Sorry for any inconvenience.

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• Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are wrong. I recommend looking at our wikipage for examples on what we are looking for.
• You cannot apply as a character under the age of 18.
• You seem to be applying as the anime character Kirito. I recommend trying to create your own character instead of using one as that can be considered copying within itself.
• Expand upon your biography and add server lore.
• The character is far too young to have been around during Asulon. Try looking at the lore of Athera. Why did he run away from home? A small observation is that everyone seems to be using Japanese names as well, is there a reason for this? It's unrealistic to be a master swordsman at the age of 10 to 15, as most can't even hold a full sized sword as a child.
• Parkour is not a strength.
• Expand upon your weaknesses. Archery is not a weakness because you can easily learn how to do it. Weaknesses are obstacles and the inability to do something physically or a negative personality trait. 
• You're using a Kirito skin. Please use your own skin that's not a known character. 

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