[Denied] Application

[bobisthebest1234 317]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:jacobcraft04
How old are you?:
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):yes but hype link won't work please accept me.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes 
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: no ooc spamming 
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): war machine stuff
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? a role-play server forum.

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?:playing of a made character online in a game with other players.
What is metagaming?:using info not available in role-play to help you win a fight or something like that.
What is power gaming?:roleplaying something impossible, like bob blows a tower down.

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: Willam
Character’s gender: male
Character’s race: human\heartlander
Character’s age:20
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): I was born in Petrus with my mom kate a nun my dad bill a rich trader my brother greg and my little sister helan. when I was 4 my dad was killed by the orc Unkanuka and we fled the city in horror to the city of aldersberg where i learnt to fight and trade. my favour book is Blood age by Yalen grandaxe.

 

 I meet violate and soon I was merryed to her, she is beautiful she had deep blue eye and golden yellow hair. we soon had a kid name john he was smart and kind. we went on a trip to the cloud temple and I got hooked on the magic of our home land and now I also swore to kill that orc who killed my dad.   
Personality Traits: funny, fast, fast talking, slit Irish ascent, smart, rich, high society, convincing, odd, kind, calm, week, brave, haves lots of friends, cool, makes epic music, tall, likes robes, humble, easy going, friendly, loves kids and pets. 
Ambitions: get a pet, make Unkanuka pay for his crimes, find out about the world, ride a dragon.
Strengths/Talents: convincing, rage in battle sometimes, fast, good with bow.
Weaknesses/Inabilities: dark magic, goblins, sword fighting.
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): black hair, red robes, 6ft. tall 174lb.
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): hyper link not working sorry.

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

This application has been

Reasons:

• Proofreading is not present, grammatical and spelling mistakes are common in the application
• No skin
• Traits are too good for the character. You cannot be perfect
• Definitions are too vague/wrong, please elaborate and fix these
• Age is not filled out on application
• Biography is very lacking in detail, the grammatical mistakes make it feel disjointed and overall hard to follow

Please fix these mistakes and re-post your application with the fixes after 24 hours, PM me for any help and have a nice day :)

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.