[Denied] Beamon4 Application

[Beamon4 1690]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Beaumont

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 Yes

Have you applied to this server before?

Yes   

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule stating you cannot declare war with proper reasoning 

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? No

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was looking for a server i looked online and found this i looked at a youtuber play it and it looked really cool.

 

What is roleplaying?: Its pretending to be something someone your not like you can be president obama or thorin even though your not.

 

what is metagaming?: Its the way you do something the way you plan it the way you carry it out

 

What is power gaming?: Your long term goal or your server goal and what you will do to get to it

 

Character’s name: Dimlin

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Dwarf

Character’s age:75

Biography Dimlin was born the day of moria's downfall he hade been born minutes before The Devil Balrog was released from the depths of the earth his parents escaped seconds before balrog torn up the residences He loved hearing that story he had the same life any other dwarf child would until at the age of 20 his parents died in a fire it was hard for him to cope with but he got past at the age of 45 he got married to celestial at 46 they hade a child storuim they loved him very much and cared for him. Dimly hade many jobs a miner a forger a merchant and a soldier being a soldier of Dain IronFoot gave good pay and a steady life. 

 

One day he was roaming the halls of the iron hills when a person came running up to him explaining his son had died fighting for his kind he didn't listen to the explanation since he was burrowing the depths of sorrow when they told his wife he and her both mourned in sadness they told him not to join the Dains army and it looked like they were right he hade learned orcs hade killed him he was a vengeful person and vengeance was something was needed and wanted in his life this was end goal.

 

Ambitions: To become a dwarf Lord, To avenge his son, To let his family live a good life To have a happy life.

Strengths/Talents: Forging ,Expert Assassin ,Merchant ,Diplomat, Fighting

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Scared of being the last of his kin ,Not avenging his son ,to be killed by a orc or a elf

Appearance

 

My computers f2 is putting up brightness since this technical difference its is a 

 

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or Gimlinthedwarf/planetminecraft.com

[_Jandy_ 3519]

This application is Denied! You may re-apply in 24 hours.

- Please use server lore in the bio, I beleive you may be drawing history from Lord of the Rings. The server and the spectacular book series are very different and I advise you learn about the server lore on the wiki.

- Please elaborate on your RP definition.

- Your Metagaming, and Powergaming definitions are incorrect and need to be rewirtten correctly, I suggest reading accepted/implemented applications and re-wording the correct definitions. 

- The listed weaknesses aren't quite weaknesses, so much as fears the character has. (When these are rewritten please try to make strengths and weaknesses balance each other out.

 

 

 

(I think the skin is very good though!)

[_Jandy_ 3519]

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