[Denied] [Pending] Haunter3's First Application

[Gizzol 252]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: haunter3

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: the sticking to role play as I feel it is a very vital part of what this server is

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): N/A

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Friends and I were looking for a new server to call home and a player recommend it to us, Zarrol will be role played by one of my friends who was accepted here long ago

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: Role playing, the action of taking on a role and playing as that role.

What is metagaming?: Meta gaming is the action of taking things from Out Of Character context, examples include skype, teamspeak, and messaging.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is to become something that would be god like or over powered as some people may call it examples are going through a fight with 10 men winning and coming out unscathed, now this could happen if the men were all untrained and had no weapons but it is still next to impossible you would not be hit at all in this fight.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Gizzok

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Orc, Goblin

Character’s age: 27 summers

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 Gizzok grew up in a small orc village located somewhere in the nothern mountains of Athera if you asked someone who lived at the time they would surely say they hadn't heard of it, mainly consisting of goblins. His father’s name was Gizzurk and he served as a tinker in the town, his mother went by a name he could no longer remember as she was always at the tavern doing things, she  was the tavern owner in the town she was the place to go to if you wanted news, or other things. Since the town was mainly composed of Goblins it was a somewhat technologically advanced mining town, the town fortified with good defenses manned mainly by the Uruk’s of the town were quite good, but as one would think with orcs manning it, not nearly perfect.

At a young age of what Gizzok seems to remember as his eighth summer he befriended a young ogre named Zarrol by his parents who as one would think not as smart as the goblin and taken advantaged on being used mainly as laborers but they were more slaves than anything, Gizzok and Zarrol had a good relationship unlike the other Goblins Gizzok didn’t take too much advantage of his big Olog friend. Gizzok and Zarrol were friends for about two summers before something occurred in their village, the Uruk defenders had not seen any fighting in months and were getting unruly and as orcs do brawled quite a bit, they were also drunk most of the time as well. Well a band of mercenary’s must have noticed this for they executed their plan about a month later, the town being a mining town also traded quite a bit, one day when farmers were bringing food to trade to the town the mercenary’s slipped into their carts of hay and sacks of other food of course the farmers knew about this but were being paid well enough, besides they thought it’s no fun trading with orcs anyhow and it wasn’t much farther to a human civilization that they could trade in, for as much no but they could still trade in it.

So on that day of Gizzok and Zarrol’s tenth fall mercenaries slipped into the town unnoticed, while the guards slept and the one that were guarding were drunk, they made their move setting fire to things all over the town most likely the guard house first, Zarrol and Gizzok were up and about playing and whatnot noticed the fire, they did what any frightened child would do and went and looked for their parents, Uruks were fighting the mercenarys all over the town sadly the mercenaries were obviously more skilled and the Uruks fell one by one, the tavern by then was pretty much completely burnt so he went looking for his dad to no avail his house was burnt down, so in a matter of self-preservation Gizzok and Zarrol ran out of the town and into the forest, they lived off of Gizzok’s brains and Zarrol’s strength for a few summers long, while out in the wild they traversed all over the Northern Mountains and saw many things, they heard about the Ublu can and thought of going to try to join it since it sounded like all of their beliefs were practiced there, until they wandered upon a group of people some orcs some humans, they seemed nice enough, so Gizzok and Zarrol stayed with them for a while Gizzok had grown approval from the human leader, so the leader one day asked Gizzok to stay with them and be the camps Tinker, Gizzok said “Zarrol has to stay as well.” After Gizzok pointed out some great ways Zarrol would be a benefit, some of the camp members were annoyed by Zarrol thinking out loud but quickly got used to it, Zarrol was all they needed to get wood around camp and he was a good fighter. Gizzok and Zarrol are still with this group of people to this day, they later found out it was a group of mercenaries but they seemed nice enough so they stayed, they are currently located in the Northern Mountains, they are thinking of moving south to begin better lives.

 

               

Personality Traits: Gizzok is a witty fellow not knowing when to shut up, he easily gets angered and doesn’t simmer down very quickly, the only one he considers a true friend is Zarrol.

Ambitions: Gizzok is the tinker of the camp, he is also their cook.

Strengths/Talents: Gizzok is able to think fast gets him out of many tight situations, he is ok with a dagger, and he is also a proficient cook. He needs Zarrol to be most effective as they have strategies worked out.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Gizzok, being around the height of 4 feet 7 inches cannot run very quickly, he mainly makes up with this by riding on Zarrols back, he tried alchemy before he just cannot do it he cannot use big things either, he has many allergy's leading him to sniffle quite a bit, he is allergic to some fish as well, when he eats them his body breaks out in very itchy rashes, it also makes him have trouble breathing, women can not stand him, he also has poor sight, he can see things close but when it starts to get far away he can not see it.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Gizzok is 4’7 he is about 80 pounds, he has greenish skin, brown hair, well brown hair when he grows any.

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[_Stigwig 1510]

I'm denying you due to the fact that you failed to add sufficient lore to your application. You may apply again in 24 hours, if you need help finding lore for your next attempt please PM me so I can give a helping hand.

I've placed your application on pending due to the fact that there are just a few changed you need to make to bring it up to the required standard for new players:

 

- Your biography is fairly lengthy, but extremely lacking in server lore. You need to incorporate actual events, people and different locations into the biography. I would advise you either do this by searching the wiki or reading over forum threads.

 

- Your weakness is rather generic, to add more depth to the character and create a better application with a more well-rounded character. Attempt to add a detailed and unique weakness.

 

You have 24 hours to make the following changes, PM me if you either need help with fixing these aspects or when you have done the edit and want me to review it again. 

[_Stigwig 1510]

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