[Denied] [Pending] Grimagination's Application

[grimmothy 188]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: radeoactivesoup

How old are you?: 17

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): aye

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): nope

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: of course

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  The ban on cyber bullying 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? friends on teamspeak

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: The act of playing with the mindset of actually being the character you are playing to the extent that one would even speak like their character would.

What is metagaming?: Using information your character would not know to influence your game play

What is powergaming?: When a character does something that would be impossible for them to actually accomplish in a realistic setting

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Illidar Alymar

Character’s gender: female

Character’s race: High Elf

Character’s age: 18

Biography 

        Growing up in the Alymar home means strictly adhering to the traditions of our elders. While for some this would not be an issue. My father was among the last of the wardens but their disbandment left him embittered, but my sibling, Ilkrith was but a young man, still full of awe for the world and it's many wonders, fell in love with a wood elf, a scandal among the high elves.  He was disowned after watching his lover executed on charges trumped using the meager influence of my parents was disowned. While many of my kind are often cold and distanced, he and I were very close, and seeing him leave never return. Left me torn  between the traditions I'd grown with, or the brother who I loved.

      As soon as I was able I left to go and find him. Leaving with little to no preparation was admittedly a poorly advised idea, especially for an elf. But I don't think I can ever feel at ease where even my own parents can throw me away and never think twice. My brother is waiting out there somewhere, and a little gold along the way wouldn't exactly kill me either. I wish I had some direction though, he may have left Aegis altogether.

Personality Traits: Naive, Trusting, Ambitious, Neutral Good Alignment.

Ambitions: Finding Lost Brother, Proving to my elders that breaking away from convention is a valid alternative to the current status quo, becoming wealthy. 

Strengths/Talents: Deceptive Strength, Extremely quick learner, Extremely eager and willing to learn and improve.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Naive, impulsive, young (especially for an elf), jack of all trades master of none.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 6'1" , Lean but not without any tone either.

Appearance: 

 

your father smells of elderberry

[mitto 2312]

 

Your character may appear Androgynous however that's not an appropriate gender.

 

 

If you want assistance or need me to review your app again once you have successfully edited this applications to meet my criteria please PM me on the forums.

Please include more server lore in your biography.

 

Pure High elves generally have white to blonde hair, considering you backstory makes it seem like your character is from a pure High Elf family it would be unlikely your character would have not been kicked out as well.

 

Please make the necessary changes within the allocated time.

 

Also being young isn't a weakness.

 

You can re apply in 24 hours

[mitto 2312]

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