[Denied] The_Herb's Whitelist Application

[herbert12111 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: The_Herbs

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyber bullying is strictly prohibited, and will not be condoned in any shape or form. If you promote, or take part in cyber bullying amongst the community, you will be punished just as severely.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? from a friend - hatybee123

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Role-play is to play a role of a character and it's behaviour to create realism in fiction

What is metagaming?: meta gaming is by using OOC information to basically cheat your way through without experiencing it IC

What is power gaming?: Power gaming is to force an action on someone.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Vekus Jaichist

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 21

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): 

 

Up until now, Most of Vekus’ jobs were either helping to unload the wagons or making supports from logs to help lift the wagons while others people replaced broken axles or wheels, nothing that he had done was from his dream, an alchemist. One night, when the wagons ran right into a packet of hungry wolves, a pack with about 7, some were small and some were modest, easily taken out with a bash to the head, but there were just too many of them. Vekus' had to unleash his spear once again, stabbing whatever jumped at his way.

 

The journey seemed long, but atlas, they arrived at Oren, this is where Vekus’ promise ended, the defence of the caravans, as Vekus was unpacking his belongings, the caravan owners could not bare seeing him leave our group, after all the protection he has given them, so they asked me "Vekus, are you sure you don't want to come with us? We can definitely use your sword arms.” But the reality struct them, Vekus did not accept the offer of staying with the group, he wanted to start a new life in Oren, and this is where the last goodbye was said, as Vekus started his new life, as an alchemist.

 

Personality Traits: Happy

Ambitions: To be successful in the art of alchemy

Strengths/Talents: Vekus is very good at math.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Bad at artistical mindset and linguistic skills.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Vekus looks mildly skinny, with a height of 5'7. his weight is 59kg. Has long dark hair.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

[mitto 2312]

Your biography isn't short word wise, it's just very short and doesn't cover most of your character background. Please give me more insight into the events of his life that have molded him into what he is today.

 

You can achieve this by:

Adding more lore to you biography. Mention Oren isn't enough sadly. I would like more.

 

Explaining how he got his strengths, weaknesses and personality traits through events in his biography. Everything has a reason.

 

 

Your strengths and weaknesses aren't really correct. A strength would be like 'Good eyesight' and a weakness would be like 'Not very strong' or 'Scared of spiders.'

 

 

You can re apply in 24 hours. Please make the necessary changes.

[mitto 2312]

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