[Denied] Application

[Uggruk 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:X_Mockingbird_X

How old are you?:18

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I am aware

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Nope

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rules for war

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):I think I am okay

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Looking for a Minecraft RP server

((The Clan Braduk are Interested in my Character))

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Living as a character in a fantasy world and becoming them.

What is metagaming?: Where people know stuff like oh! Lord I know you murderd that peasant! without them beaing there or online at the time.

What is powergaming?: For example a play who sees himself or herself as a complete bad-ass beating say a dragon with a single hit or a group of players without them having the chance to even dodge or fight back RP-Wise.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Uggruk

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:Ogre/Olog

Character’s age:Thirty five 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Uggruk is just a simple Ogre living his everyday life in the desert trying his best to survive-grabbing work from any of the Orc villages nearby his lone hut be it lifting crates to clubbing humans. But that soon all changed when the rebellion sparked the Orcs from the nearby villages wanted Uggruk to help them with lifting the supplies as they overthrew the Rex. Now after all the blood-shed Uggruk is just in his lone hut again but times have changed Uggruk was foced out with the other races by the undead hordes. Resting in the new land of Asulon aiding his  fellow orcs in gathering their strength back from the undead and then the plague a year later uggruk manages to survive the plague still lifting supplies to each village aiding them with food and water gathered from nearby leftovers from raids he now settles in a small hut in the desert but a clan is interested in him a clan by the name of Braduk  he seems to be very interested in joining them so he wishes to seek adventure and start his own story like in those tree books he keeps seeing. But he has one weakness he is rather dumb even for a Olog and does not necessary understand fighting but if provoked he will gladly try to hammer his foes head with a club but a issue is that he is very slow because of his height and weight 

Personality Traits: Dumb-cheerful-gets angry easily.

Ambitions:To see the world.

Strengths/Talents: Good at lifting large amounts of cargo and handy with a club.

Weaknesses/Inabilities:Slow and stupid.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Uggruk his a tall hunk of mass his heigt is 10 foot and his weight around 23 stone his skin would be a snot-like green with a hint of brown his face would be bulky with one scar around his nose and wearing a simple loin-cloth made from a average wolf hide nothing special.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere):I have one now made from a Clan Braduk member 

Edited July 9, 2015 by Uggruk

[Fireheart 2777]

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed you on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

Please lengthen your Biography out to make it longer. I am looking for around the size of two well sized paragraphs. You can incorporate some of the causes of your strengths or weaknesses in their with detail or branch off on more information about your character.

 

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki can be found on the Wiki. It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore such as certain places, to wars or even significant events to state just a few examples!

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and/or fix your application based off the information and request above. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

Applicant failed to make all requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advise and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Fireheart 2777]

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