[Denied] {Pending] Chocice09- Warin

[Warin 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Chocice09

 

How old are you?: 14

 

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes i am aware this is a PG server.

 

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes i have.( https://www.lordofth...hocice09-warin/ )

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes i have read and agreed to all the rules

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyber bullying not being alowed as this can cause stress for players instead of fun and enjoyment.

 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No there are no rules that confuse me, i checked a few rules incase i thought of the wrong idea but i was correct afterall.

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was watching minecraft on youtube and came across this server on someones channel.

 

Definitions

 

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

 

What is roleplaying?: I think roleplaying is action of playing a role of a character that isnt of your own personalitly.

 

What is metagaming?: I think metagaming is playing "out of character". Using infomation that you might know, but your character wouldn't know of at the time.

 

What is powergaming?: I think powergaming is the use of making your action unavoidable or impossible to change. eg: "Jake killed the villager and killed the Orc."

 

In-Character Information

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

 

Character’s name: Warin

 

Character’s gender: Male

 

Character’s race: High Elf

 

Character’s age: 20

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

Warin was born in the High Elven Kingdom, to his mother Ada and his father close beside, called Forwin. Warin was a kins and caring child, brought up very independent and his mother and father made sure he was well mannored and respectful. Warin had a strict but caring childhood, his parents made sure he would not make the same miss stakes they did when they were young. Warin was clever, and very intelligent during lesson.Warin was well liked by many people within the elven kingdom, many friends would trust Warin with their lives as he was know to be trusted very well. Warin's parents, Ada and Forwin were both high mages and helped their King many times. Warin's ambitions were to always learn magic. Magic was very strong inside of Warin and new he had to become a mage. But under strict conditions, his parents were only allowed to start teaching Warin at the age of 12. Warins childhood up to 10 was peaceful and without war. 

 

On Warin's 12th birthday him and his family traveled to the wood elves kingdom. But on the way something happened that changed Warin's life forever. On the journey to the Wood Elves kingdom a group of Orcs attack his family's carrige. The horse's were killed, and Warin's parents were taken away with the Orcs. Warin was left at the carrige, screaming for help until he pass out. Warin was found on the path by High Elves, who new Warin and quickly took him back to recover. Warin closely remebered what happened and fell into grife as his parents never came back. Warin had to live with his Aunt who lived to roads away. Warin never learnt the magic he so wanted to learn as his aunt did not know magic. After the grife had past away Warin's trust of other had faded and was hard to earn. But Warin new he had to learn magic to show his parents proud, and one day he knows he will. But Warin's hate over Orc's had never faded away. Warin left the kingdom, looking for a new adventure.

 

Personality Traits: Warin is very kind and well mannored. Easy to trust and intelligent. But Warin's anger over Orc's is very  easy to set off.

 

Ambitions: Warin want's to learn all magic to show his parents proud.

 

Strengths/Talents: Warin is intelligent and quick on his feet. Warin can out run most races with ease. Warin is good with dagger but magic runs through making want to learn all magic.

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Warin is not the strongest elf out there, as he is slim and quick. Cant stand Orc's, would attack if an Orc if he is angered by one.

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Warin is about 6 foot 2, and weights about 10 stone. Warin is quite slim but tall. Quick and swift. Warin has short brown hair and brown eyes. Warin wears a red thick leather jacket with a white shirt underneath. Warin carries a bow and arrow around his shoulder and has thick brown leather boots. Warin also wears black trousers with a pouch on the side.  

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): 

[_Stigwig 1510]

Several issues still remain from last time this was denied:

 

- You need to incorporate more server lore into your application. You should include 3/4 pieces and make them more specific than just races or the 'High Elven Kingdom'. 

 

- A thing to note, elves are children under 50 so you may wish to change the age.

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes, if you need any help and/or once you have done the edits so I can review it again.

[_Stigwig 1510]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.