[Denied] Bombprooftoilet's Application

[bombprooftoilet 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: bombprooftoilet

How old are you?: 17

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: roleplay

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? from a friend

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: acting out a certain role

What is metagaming?: breaking the game to your own advantage

What is powergaming?: working towards one certain task while not working on nothing else

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Ailred agis

Character’s gender: male

Character’s race: Wood elf

Character’s age: 68

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Ailred agis was born on the outskirts of laureh'lin, at the age of one he was taken to vailor by a slaver and sold to military bowyer and helped to make bows for the army. He learned how to make bows from a very young age, he was beaten when he made mistakes and learned to never makes mistakes while making bows, eventually he learned to make masterful bows for the military. As his master began to trust him more he taught him how to use the bow and how to hunt, the two became friends and his master allowed him to be a free elf and began to pay him for the bows he made for the military. eventually he left the military in seek of adventure and to make new friends in the world. With a bow his old master gave to him as a parting gift and a dagger he kept from home he set out and Ailred's adventure starts in vailor.

 

 

Personality Traits: Creative,Strong willed, friendly, 

Ambitions: To protect my friends and my kingdom 

Strengths/Talents: bow making, bow

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Afraid of slavers and boats

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 6'2, 9 stone, blue eyes, short brown hair

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://prntscr.com/7tx9uh 

[mitto 2312]

Your definitions are rather lackluster, they should be expanded on. You can achieve this by going onto explain them in more detail and use examples if you wish.

 

Your powergaming definition is incorrect, please check the proper definitions on this page:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/126196-new-player-guide/?p=1213514

 

Your biography is too short:

- Please add more server lore to your biography. One piece wont cut it I'm afraid, you can find more here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page

Alternatively you can PM; Me, any other AT, your friend or any player willing to help!

 

-Please lengthen your biography, maybe explain in his biography what made him grow up to be who he is today, for instance you aren't just born kind, why is he kind? Why does he want to protect his friends and kingdom?

 

6'2 is too tall for a Wood Elf, they usually range the same as human females, 4'9 to 5'8 or similar.

 

The skin you have provided is too generic, please choose a different one because there are many players on the server who use that skin already.

 

 

Please make the changes and create another application in

 

24 Hours

[mitto 2312]

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