[Denied] Whitelist Application :d

[Kishiko 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Kishiko

How old are you?: 11

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The roleplaying rule, You need to keep in-character at all times. If you need to use OOC, you can either privately message the player using /t <minecraft name>, or by using Local OOC. This channel can be accessed by putting double brackets before your speech, like this EX: ((Like this. Don't spam Local OOC. Use PMs.))

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I searched un on google, Lord of the Rings Minecraft Server for 1.8 and this amazing server came up. 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: To act as a imaginary/real person in amy type of game play. 

What is metagaming?: A strategy used in all/some roleplaying games.

What is powergaming?: Interacting with game-like systems. Like video games.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Ashryn

Character’s gender: Female

Character’s race: Wood-Elf

Character’s age: 20 (Probably a teenager in elven life)

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):    Born in the Forests of Adrallan on July 31st, she was attacked by a orc when she was 5 years old. Her mother and father were killed by that orc also. She has two scars on her arms which she covers with bandages. She still lives with her Puxie, Finn.

       She spends most of her time in the woods slashing trees and giant spiders with her Mithril sword she got as a gift from one of the high elves. She sometimes goes with the other elves to go gathering food and items. ((I have nothing else in my mind to explain about Ashryn...))

Personality Traits: Smart, Adventurous, 

Ambitions: To learn Arcane Magic.

Strengths/Talents: Swords skills

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Planning

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 5 ft 6 (height), 120lbs or 54 kilos (weight).

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

((don't know how to post screenshot on thread...))

[James 425]

Your application is

 

 

You are not aloud to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both incorrect. 
• Your backstory is very short, and needs to be expanded upon.
• July 31st is not a date within lotc, we use our own time you can see by doing /date as a wandering soul on the server. 
• Your backstory lacks lore which can be found here. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page
• Mithril does not exist on lotc. 
• Orcs killing your parents is very cliche, I would recommend changing it. 
• To post a screenshot, upload the picture from your computer using www.imgur.com and paste the link. 

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

[James 425]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.