Jack Be Nimble, Jack Be Quick.

[V0idsoldier 1139]

((This is sort of a experiment, I was accepted as a villain and I am currently re thinking my concept a bit to fit my play-style, rather than just a murderer or a bandit I want something more sophisticated, someone not so brutal, this is what I came up with after a few hours of brainstorming, I enhanced this with the adaption to the poem I did. Also yes his name is Jack Nimble, if anyone thinks that is dumb PLEASE tell me, I thought it was clever but... yea))

Jack Be Nimble, Jack Be Quick

He ran, out of breath, how did this happen. No time to think, sweat was pouring off of his face, and yet he had only one thought. How? He scolded himself, he knew if he didn't get out of here it would be the end of him, his life, he would be executed, and not a single man nor woman would cry. He couldn't get caught, no not him, not Jack Nimble. He turned the corner, the sound of iron boots stomping behind him "OI YOU THAR, HALT OR DIE" Screamed the bloodied Irish guard, Jack nailed him in his forehead, leaving a wound, the red haired, red faced guard was ready to kill him. Quickly he wove through the alleyways, holding onto the bag more than he held onto his life. Left, right, left, left, right, straight and... wait. A wall, what... this wasn't here on the blueprints, he should have took his time and read it more quickly, no matter now, he had to go over.

Jack Jump Over The Candlestick

Without a second thought he continued running, no way was he quitting now, oh no, he was getting over that wall, whether it killed him or not. Two arrows whizzed past his head "OI DAT THAR IS HIM, KEEP FIRING!" Yelled the angry Irish man. One arrow pierced through his skin, shooting clean through, only pure adrenaline kept him going. He ran, and ran and ran, finally noticing that two arrows were lodged into the wall, that was his chance, his only chance to scale the 10 feet high wall, if he failed, he was as good as dead, and if he didn't, he was a rich man. He ran and leaped shifting his weight to his upper half and kicking off the first arrow breaking it, almost to the top he thought, he hopped off the other, so... close, he grasped it, with only his finger tips, his right fingertips at that, as his left was holding the bag. NO, his worst nightmare, he had to decide, money, or his life, the decision was so clear, yet his body wouldn't let go. Finally he willed himself to drop it, and pulled himself up just as a arrow shot were he was. About to collapse , he knew if he stopped now it was all for nothing.

Jack Keep Running, Jack Don't Stop

He kept running, using some mystery reserve of energy, he didn't know where it came from, but didn't care as long as it was there. He ran, hopping onto some building and leaping into the forest, he was as good as gone now, no way they could catch him now. He slowed down, sweat pouring off his face, he collapsed, falling into a small coma from to much physical exertion.

Jack Wake Up, Wake Up, WAKE UP!

He awoke to the sound of dogs, they got dogs after him? He asked himself, no time to question it he needed to go, it was only a few miles to his safe house, if he made it there he would be safe. IF he made it there he thought, almost doubting himself, but his brain slapped him into focus, who was he kidding, he was Jack Nimble, the greatest thief alive, and the most handsome at that, he said to himself, his ego was the size of a mountain even though he had done all this for nothing, it didn't matter he always found something to pride himself on. He had to, it kept him alive, he never had anyone else to pride him for his accomplishments, so at a young age he learned to pride himself. Memories came, bad memories, of his childhood, memories he wish he could forget, but he couldn't. If only they wouldn't come at such a... bad time...

Jack Stop Thinking You Need To Run!

((And thus ends the first part of this, I hope I get some comments, mostly on his name, and what you think!))

[V0idsoldier 1139]

((Any comment good or bad is appreciated!))

[Glasiconas 111]

(( Well this is awkward... =3 ))

[V0idsoldier 1139]

(( Well this is awkward... =3 ))

((Lol uh oh, is your character named Jack_Nimble?))

[Glasiconas 111]

(( No, he's Luc, but it might cause a bit of confusion. Username and roleplay name similarities and such. ))

[V0idsoldier 1139]

((Your choice, do you want me to change it, it is up to you, I like it, but if your uncomfortable tell me and I will try to find something else..))

[Glasiconas 111]

(( No, no, It's completely up to you, I just think it might cause a bit of confusion, that's all. ))

[V0idsoldier 1139]

((OK well, I really like it, and it may cause confusion, but not to much, so I think I will keep it, if you want me to change so just tell me, but after a few more days, I will not change it, so tell me now or forever hold your peace. Also what did you think of it?))

[steelersfan1221 300]

Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.