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[Jentos 9422]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Jentos

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes I do

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: no trolling I've been trolled in other servers

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): they all make good sence to me

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found it on a server list and I love lord of the rings

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Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: acting like if I were really in a medieval world

What is metagaming?: using information your character. Doesn't know

What is powergaming?: forcing actions your character wouldn't really do

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: Jentos Adam

Character’s gender: man

Character’s race:Human Cherkassian

Character’s age: 39

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Jentos has lived a a Cherkassian for his hole life. But when there homes where destroyed in the religion was! He tried to keep up with his beloved people and to find them a new home! Jentos spent time there learning the rules of honor and of war. While living amongst them he demanded aid from the goddess Sevseres of storms and rivers. And so he spent time exploring on his faithful horse Isembert with joy and pride of being a Cherkassian!

Personality Traits: thinks fast but badly, has berserk rages which is contrast to the calm Cherkassians

Ambitions: he wants to honor his people and find a new home! While with his people Jentos cared a bit less about what happened in the rest of the world but still did learn about the first Empire in a few old books.

Strengths/Talents is a berserk, sword fighting pro, war cries of doom, and a love of blacksmithing and alchemy

Weaknesses/Inabilities: is scared of death but especially... BUTTERFLIES!!!

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):He is very tall but very very slim about 90 pounds

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): sorry I cannot make screenshots on my computer but I can describe him, he's got normal haire purple eyes, no mouth, he's got two belts on his chest which cover a brown cloak and an empty sword scabbard again i'm sorry I can't give you a screenshot please believe me.

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[Mephistophelian 977]

This Application is put on:

 

 

For the following reason(s):

 

-Your definitions are too vague. Please explain them in more detail.

 

-There are a few blatant grammar mistakes.

 

-Your weaknesses do not balance out your strengths.

 

-There is no preview of the skin you will use.

 

-Please make your biography at least two paragraphs long.

 

-Your biography does not contain server lore.

 

You have 24 hours to make the change.

If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to PM me!

 

This Application is:

 

 

For the following reason(s):

 

-Changes not made.

 

You have [time] to wait until you can reapply.

If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to PM me!

Edited July 30, 2015 by hugothechamp
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[Mephistophelian 977]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.