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Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
 
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: IceColdSnow
How old are you?: 15
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Nope, my first try
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Destructive hacks such as kill aura, auto-mining, and free-cam, among other plugins granting an unfair advantage are not permitted. Well I agree with this rule the most, because I hate when people use hacks too get a advantage.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? A minecraft server list website (can't remember the name :p)
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you "play" as a character, not yourself. A example is when actors acts in movies.
What is metagaming?: Meta-gaming is when you  bring knowledge from the outside into the game, like I heard about a rare plant on teamspeak, and then go search for it with my character.
What is powergaming?: Powergaming is when your ignore roleplay elements, like you lost your arm, but you ignore it and can still use dual-wield weapons too get a advantage.
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: Ulf Ironbear
Character’s gender: Male
Character’s race: Mountain Dwarf
Character’s age: 23
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.) From the beggining, there was a man, and his wife, living in the doomforge clan, that decided too have a children together. When the baby was finnaly born, something happened and the new mother, died in the childbirth. Left alone with his father, Ulf had a tough childhood. His father was one of the blacksmiths of the clan, and never had time too raise his child. When Ulf was only 5 years old, he had too help his father in the blacksmith, with taking care of the fire and give him the material, that the father would work with. It wasn't a happy childhood, but he got food on the table and a bed too sleep in. 
 
When Ulf was 10, his life became completely changed. The mountain got attacked by a legion of undead, and his father died protecting it. Left alone, the clan gave him the worsts jobs. He had too work in the most dangerous parts of the mines, and if he took any pauses, or refused, he didnt get any food. Then, When he was 19, there was a accident in the mines, and Ulf nearly lost his life. It wasn't that he got any fatal injury, just that the other dwarves refused  too give him treatment. After almost facing death, Ulf decided too run away. He worked out a plan, and on his 21th birthday he put it to work. He fled from the mountain, and changed his last name to Ironbear.
 
Personality Traits: Loyal to his friends.
Ambitions: Settle down, and meet new friends.
Strengths/Talents: The basics of mining and smithing. Tough.
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Scared for dwarves in the doomforge clan, Trusting people too easy if they treat him friendly. Not one of the smartest dwarves.
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 4 and a half feet tall, A big brown beard decorates his face, sturdy body.
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://imgur.com/N3zu6lp

 

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Unfortunately your application has been denied please reapply after 24 hours with the requested changes made.

  • Your power-gaming definition is partly incorrect.
  • Your biography contains little server lore and it is cliche that your father died to undead. I recommend looking at these webpages: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Athera and http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Vailor
  • Doomforged are rather dark-skinned for Dwarves, and your skin does not reflect this. I'd suggest changing the clan mentioned or changing your skin.
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