[Denied] Application

[oki.nano 43]

Out-Of-Character Information
 
What’s your Minecraft Account Name : nanoninja23
How old are you? 13
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13) Yes
Have you applied to this server before (Please link all past applications) No
Have you read and agreed to the rules? Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most : Sexual harassment under any circumstances will not be tolerated
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules) No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft : A YouTube Channel called ParkersCommunity 
 
Definitions
 
What is role playing : To me role playing is where a person commits to a certain character acting as them
What is meta gaming : (Haven't heard the word before) But i think its where Someone takes advantage over another player
What is power gaming : (Haven't heard the word before) Its where another person leads the story and you cannot contribute of what your going to do
 
In-Character Information
 
Character’s name : Keovan Noveno  (Key-Oh-Van)
Character’s gender : Male
Character’s race : Human (Heart Lander)
Character’s age : 15
Biography :
Keovan was strangely found near a the coast and was taken in by folks of felsen at around the age of 2. He grew up trying to find his parents and has been fond of hunting. By the age of 12 he left felsen and wondered alone to a nearby forest. hunting for food and taking some small jobs of some. One day Keovan stumbled upon a group of bandits he tried sneaking past but..
 
He woke up the next day in a tent full of loot, sadly he was tied up. But it wasn't long before he realized he had a secret knife. Keovan broke loose and took a portion of the loot enough for him to survive at least another year. Hes now 15, yet he still wonders what purpose do he have in the this realm.
Personality Traits : very quite around strangers, really social around familiar faces
Ambitions : To protect friends that may hurt them
Strengths & Talents : Accurate with a bow & arrow , able to survive with few items
Weaknesses & Inabilities Sword fighting to Keovan is lacking , easily loses the ability to keep calm with non friendly players
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight) 167 cm Tall & 49 kg his scarf and googles are precious to him if lost he will try to find it
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here)

almost forgot i will add minor changes to my skin to add more detail nothing will be added or removed its just for detail

[mitto 2312]

Your application has been [DENIED] this is because there were too many problems with this application, or just one or two big problems that I could not look past. Do not be scared however, you can still apply again, just hopefully after you have made the changes I have laid out.

 

(1)

Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are incorrect. Please check the definitions guide on this post for a better understanding. Remember to write it out in your own words.

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/126196-new-player-guide/?p=1213514

 

(2)

Your biography is a bit short, but if you follow the next few points you will easily be able to flesh it out.

 

(2a)

Please add server lore to your biography. Just like Game of Thrones of Skyrim, Lord of the Craft has it's own lore, setting and history. In order to show you understand the universe that we're currently set in you will have to include some lore in your biography.

 

Our wiki is stocked with good info!

http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page

 

(2b)

Please include more important events in your characters life which have moulded them to be who they are today. Why do they have the personality traits, strengths and weaknesses you say they have? For instance if a characters weakness was they were afraid of spiders it may be because of a traumatic experience with spiders at a young age. Explain your character in detail.

 

 

You can re apply in 24 hours from the time of this denial.

[mitto 2312]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.