[Denied] Application

[oki.nano 43]

Out-Of-Character Information

What’s your Minecraft Account Name : nanoninja23

How old are you? 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13) Yes

Have you applied to this server before : Yes, This is now my third time for my first character

Have you read and agreed to the rules? Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most : Sexual harassment under any circumstances will not be tolerated

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules) No, i havent found a difficulty yet

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft : A YouTube Channel called ParkersCommunity

Definitions

What is role playing : To me role playing is where a person commits to a certain character acting as them

What is meta gaming : (Haven't heard the word before) Another player using information that they gained out of character

What is power gaming : (Haven't heard the word before) Forcing Activity to another character giving them no means of response

In-Character Information

Character’s name : Keovan Noveno (Key-Oh-Van)

Character’s gender : Male

Character’s race : Human (Heart Lander)

Character’s age : 18

Biography :

Keovan grew up in a village north east of Adria . Keovan never really knew his parents for when he was around 2 years old, strangers of the elven kin came into the bar that his father had owned. There were 3 of them one of them ordered while the rest stood behind, suddenly the two burst into action pulling their guns shooting Keovan's father. While the three were were grabbing the money and the other customers were running Keovan's Mother gave Keovan to his aunt with the goggles of their family (all members of the family has one) and ran away. Keovan never really knew what happened to his mother only that she was long gone. That day Keovan never trusted strangers for the loss of his family is too great of an impact..

Many Years later out in the woods of his Aunts cabin west of adria his aunt decides to teach 9 year old Keovan how to use the bow. After many weeks Keovan mastered most of the bow but somehow finds difficulty using it in suspenseful situations. 3 days later Keovan notice somethings wrong his aunt usually goes outside at this time. Keovan gets worried and grabs his bow then starts to walk downstairs...

He was right as Keovan walks downstairs he notice something memories of the past floods his mind. He pulls his bow sadly his hands are shaking. Weirdly there were only two but then, his aunt grabs a knife stabbing one of the elv's saying "you remember i see". the other grabs Keovan's aunt by the neck and holds her up. "Its Time" says a voice in his head, Keovan aims for the the elv that's attacking his aunt. He closes his eyes before shooting his bow but then opens them and releases the arrow. The elv falls back "you will pay for this!" says the elv as he lies on the floor.

Three years later his aunt died forcing him to now become an orphan .Sadly Keovan didn't want to go to another home that he may loose so he ran away into the wild. While Keovan was venturing through the wild he noticed a cabin, Keovan knew the forest near him pretty well but never noticed this cabin. He knocks on the door no one answers, weirdly the door was open. He quickly lashes for food since he had not been eating for a few days. Minutes later passes and the owner comes back luckily he wasn't angry, He was actually surprised.

The old man took Keovan in and gave him an orange scarf. Keovan asked "whats this for?"

The old man replied "it will come in handy one day , you'll be able to open it up as a blanket

and use it for comfort out in the wild". Keovan thanked the old man that never told his name,

he was trained in how to survive with bare essentials. Years have passed and Keovan said farewell to the old man and continued on with his adventure.

(Hope this was better :)

Personality Traits : very quite around strangers, really social around familiar faces ,eager to learn anything exciting

Ambitions : To protect friends & family that may hurt them

Strengths & Talents : Accurate with a bow & arrow , able to survive with few items

Weaknesses & Inabilities : Easily loses the ability to trust in others

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight) 167 cm Tall & 49 kg his scarf and googles are precious to him if lost he will try to find it, black hair

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here)

http://i.imgur.com/U3xJBJn.png?1

[mitto 2312]

our application has been [DENIED] this is because there were too many problems with this application, or just one or two big problems that I could not look past. Do not be scared however, you can still apply again, just hopefully after you have made the changes I have laid out.

 

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You failed to make the original edit. There are no guns on Lord of the Craft, think of it just a fantasy/medieval server like Game of Thrones, Skyrim, Lord of the Rings, etc.

 

 

You can re apply in 24 hours from the time of this denial.

[mitto 2312]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.