[Denied] [Pending] Elijahetodd's Whitelist Application

[slayerofslender 41]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Esirblockington

How old are you?:12 (13 in February)

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/132922-elijahetoddds-application/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:no offensive skins

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? YouTube

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?:pretending to be a character

What is metagaming?: skills in side the game

What is powergaming?:skills outside the game

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name:shal ral

Character’s gender:male

Character’s race:dark elf

Character’s age:50

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):in a long dark cave in princedom of malor lived a man named ralk lor and a

woman named ania while being blacksmiths they deciced to have a baby so knew that

ania couldn't have a baby so they adopted one but they didn't have money and so

ania made a deal with a priest to have a child the priest said "ill give you the child you disserve but with a price" then ralk said in a husky but shivery voice

"whats the price" the priest said that "your child will be able to have kids"

ralk said "but are family will tree will never grow" ania said "will do it"

then 20 years later the child witch is now a man loved his life when he was learning the arts of blacksmithing he learned so well he could craft you any sword with the right materials like diamonds and any armor with the right materials cause he knew how but he wanted to learn archery and his mom was a good archer so he learned that to once he learned that witch took him a 5 years archery seemed hard but now he's a decent archer he now says blacksmithing is better than archery he still pretends he likes it to keep his mom proud then 25 years later he was going to move out and he did and his mom and dad's secret is still unknown to him so he now wants t find a girl to marry and have kids when he found a girl named lisa a dark elf like him and the most beautiful black hair and the prettiest eyes they were like bound to each other they both went up to each other and he said your pretty do you want to come get some dinner se said let tomorrow at 5.00 ok pm then the next after noon in his parents place he got up in a jiff did his hair cleaned his teeth and took a bath in a small pool and dressed up in his finest clothes but ralk said "what's the hurry son" shal ral said "I going on a date" his dad "said son I want to talk to you" shal said "dad you worry" ralk said "a long time ago we made a deal with a priest he made it so you couldn't have kids but it was the only way for you to be born" shal said "what dad after all these years you didn't tell me" ralk said "it was the only way" shal said "well im going to kill the preist" ralk said "son you cant" and he was gone for a 5 days when he came back he told his mom and dad the great news and they were so happy

that they went he went away and lived a story

Personality Traits: kind funny smart

Ambitions: to have a family and to keep the family tree on going

Strengths/Talents: blacksmithing fighting

Weaknesses/Inabilities: archery

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):short white hair long ears dark pale skin

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://imageshack.com/a/img661/5120/SqkXDB.png

[Mephistophelian 977]

This Application is put on:

For the following reason(s):

-Your definitions of meta and power gaming are off.

-Your app contains poor grammar, especially in the bio part. Fix it, please (Hint: Use full stops, commas, capital letters and more).

-Your biography contains some mention of magic that the 'priest' performs, yet no such thing exists.

-Your weaknesses do not balance out your strengths.

-Your bio contains too few mentions of server lore.

You have 24 hours to make the change.

If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to PM me!

Denied due to:

-Changes not being made.

You may reapply in 24 hours.

[Mephistophelian 977]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.