[Denied] Xxrapidsxxhd's Application

[xXRAPIDSXxHD 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:xXRAPIDSXxHD

How old are you?:14

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: You must follow established lore while you roleplay

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?    Probably not a panda youtube

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Role-playing refers to the changing of one's behaviour to assume a role, either unconsciously to fill a social role, or consciously to act out an adopted role.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is any strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset, uses external factors to affect the game, or goes beyond the supposed limits or environment set by the game. Another definition refers to the game universe outside of the game itself. Metagaming differs from strategy in that metagaming is making decisions based upon out of game knowledge, whereas strategies are decisions made based upon in-game actions and knowledge.

What is powergaming?: is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems, particularly video games, board games, and role playing games, with the aim of maximising progress towards a specific goal, to the exclusion of other considerations such as storytelling,

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: derrick  Fleming   

Character’s gender: male

Character’s race: human

Character’s age: 19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

grand dad died in the war of the  undead  and his mum and dad died from natural causes he was hoping for a life of adventure a life of danger  and to have great friends   

 

as i grew older I got mature and wise  and some how able to see the the flash backs of my parents death and my skills with a bow inhansed quickly and the same with a sword it was like he was born to kill the evil and protect the good

  

Personality Traits: ambitious daring  brave and  strong

Ambitions: to make friends

Strengths/Talents: can use a bow and sword

Weaknesses/Inabilities: cant pvp with fists

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):10 stone 560 height

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):  http://imgur.com/edit 

[tilly 5115]

 

Hello, applicant. You have been denied for the following reasons:

• You have blatantly plagiarized all three of your definitions from other websites. This is your first warning.
• Make sure that you contain more references to the lore, such as the place your character grew up in, or where he/she has traveled to or aspires to go to. Also, try including more historical things that your character could have witnessed (like the giant worm attack in Athera!) - check out the wiki if you need to.
• The link to the skin you've attached doesn't seem to have a destination.
• Please improve the quality of your application because I do not feel you understand what is required in order to role-play on this server!

You may reapply in twenty four hours.

If you need any help, feel free to PM me or ask for help in the WS chat in-game.

Good luck!

[tilly 5115]

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