tomfaz application

[tomfaz 26]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:tomfazz

-How old are you?: 15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: london gmt

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: with english being my main language i like to think my grammar is good may make the odd mistake but who does not p.s sorry for the odd spelling mistake my laptop keys occasionally dont type.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:During the day i will soon be attending college as a level 1 engineer after that i like to come home and chill out normally play some games on the computer and genrally browse the net about things going on in minecraft

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:i would say the most 30/35 hours least 10 hours

-How long have you played minecraft?:around about 4-5 months

-What do you know about roleplaying?:i understand that role play is wear you take control of a fictional character and see they world as he/she lives for example if i were rp'ing as shakespeare i would write and speak how he would have spoken.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: i imagain the server will be a fun and welcoming enviroment to be in were you can be friends with everyone and being able to be a completly different person which for some would be very nice, i also think that because of what you have achieved so far the so is going to be a fun, loving enviroment to be in.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:i have played on a few none rp servers which were ok but the only problem is griefing and swearing thefore the reason i left as i belive that minecraft is a game with a varried age group and some parents would not approve their children playing the game with all the swearing

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes i have i rules are put the for a reason and i will 100% stick by them because i no it would not be a fun server if there were no rules because others would just run recklessly around the map.

-Name the 4 races on this server:they would be elves,humans,dwarfs and orcs

-How did you hear about us?: Minecraftforum showed this server on the side bar whilst i looked at other rp servers

-Did you vote?: Yes.

-What was your favourite Law?: not allowing racism as i think it is disgusting how people are judged becaeuse of a natonality or religon

-What was your least favourite Law?: Being unable to use an "inappropriate username" you may have been given an account with a foolish nickname but family/friend therefore not being able to change it or play this server

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: tomfazz

In-Character:

-Character Name:keble

-What is your Race?: Human

-Biography:keble is a very strong man and has been fighting since the young age of 16 this is because sadly his mother died when he was born and his father was mudered whilst walking home from the mines by bandits. keble was only 13 when his father died and had to live and cook for himself as he had no family near by, he greaved of his fathers death for months and months then one rainy day the was an unexpected knock at the door kebles uncle his last bit of family from his fathers side, had came to take him to the city of aegis to live with him and teach him how to fight so then if one day the time arose when he need ro fight he would be able. At the age of 19 keble left his uncle and joined an army and helped to fight the undead forces arising from hell and any villian or evil that gets in his way to making aegis a safe and happy place to live meets the sad fate of death as he does not want mothers and farthers being taken from children like his were.

-Character Age:25.

Character Appearance:-keble is a tall muscular man standing around 6 ft off the ground he walks the lands of aegis wearing black clothes with a white tree in the centre of his top. He has long black hair and a little bit of stubble he looks very much like his farther.

-Character Personality:Keble is a noble caring man and always helps the old he is a very brave man and isnt afraid of anything he loves to fight and

hates bandits as they are the horrible souls that took his father away from him in cold blood.

-Your ambitions:Kebles ambitions are too rid all the undead and evil out of the land of aegis to make it a safe place to live for everyone and what he hopes for, his only family of a wife and children.

-Can your character read or write?: yes.

-Can your character mine?:he has dabled in a little bit but not much hes a better fighter than anything

-Are you a capable builder?:no not really as he is used to moving around the place and staying in lots of inns

-Can you wield a sword?: yes he is an excellent swordsman and is particualy violent when it comes to bandits and he shows them no mercy like they shoe his father

-Enjoy Farming?: never really done it but happy to give it a try.

-Does your character have any special skills?: he heals very quickly he likes to think this is because his mother and father are watching over him.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://imageshack.us...to/my-images/14 ... 01339.png/

-Other Information:i hope i get accepted but i would just like to say i love what your doing and i think your work is superb

[Whitebeard 126]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having 's everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

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http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=35&t=1397?