[Denied] application paper

[staycool 0]

out of character info

what is your minecraft account name:11StayCool

how old are you:15

are you aware that this server in pg-13:yes

what's the rule you agree with the most: be a fair bad guy

are there any rules that don't make sense: no

how did you find out about lord of the craft: browsing for a role play server

what is role play: acting like your in the world,(aka) it not a game

what is meta gaming: it is using info that your caricature shouldn't have, like using out of game chat to call for help

what is power gaming: it is playing unfair, like saying you poled out a gun, or saying, and then he died

in game character info

character name: Toren Yonder

characters sex: male

characters race: high elf/human

characters age:26

biography

 Toren lived in haelun'or and was walking home when he smelt fire, he rushed home hoping it wasn't his house. when he got home he stopped deed in his tracks when he saw it was his house in flames. he rushed in side to look for his parents and sister, but what he saw was his parents (his mom was high elf and his dad was human)in the corner as burnt corpses. he stood there staring a the gruesome scene, when he snapped out of shock he ran upstairs to look for his older sister but didn't find her. he ran out side coifing from the smoke but no one was doing any thing to help put his house out. he ran down to the fire department on his own to get them, but he also helped by taking buckets of water and splashing them on his house until it was put out.

Toren sat there on his knees, and made a vow to find his sister no madder how long it would take. he lived on the streets doing jobs and favors for people to gain coin and food, but he tried his best not to steal because his parents wonted him to be an honest and good man at hart, and he would always remember that.

personality/traits: he is very quiet at times but is very trust worthy if you show him your trust worthy, and he doesn't believe in racel stereo types.

ambitions: find his sister

strengths/talents: a good thinker, good with a bow, and is nimble

weaknesses/inability's: not good in hand to hand combat, afraid of fires

height:6.5

weight:115

he got his dads looks and his moms smarts.

he has brown hair, brown eyes, a white shirt with gold high lights, brown pants that have holes, black shoos, an over the shoulder gear strap, and black gloves.

(couldn't find out how to put a pic I'm very sorry).

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited September 14, 2015 by staycool
got the metagaming and powergaming definitions rong

[Fireheart 2777]

 

Greetings applicant, after reviewing your application I have placed you on Pending for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You have 24 hours to make these changes. Failing to do so will result in this application being denied and thus, having to wait 24 hours before re-applying.

Your definition of Metagaming is incorrect, please refer to the link here for guidance.

Your definition of Powergaming is incorrect, please refer to the link here for guidance.

Please include Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki can be found on the Wiki. It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore such as certain places, wars or even significant events to state just a few examples!

Please provide a picture of your Character’s skin so I can review it.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! As a reminder you have 24 hours to respond to me in a PM and fix your application based off the information and request above. If you do not Private Message me I will review it on my own time around 24 hours from this post. In addition to what was stated above I reserve the right to add or remove requested edits needed for the application. Good luck applicant!

[Fireheart 2777]

 

 

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

Applicant failed to make all requested edit(s) to the application within the given 24 hour period.

 

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advise and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above.

[Fireheart 2777]

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