[Denied] Jhoqa

[Khal Jhoqa 0]

 

 http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/5125407/war-orc/ 

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yeyeye.txt

 

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Xenomorph_Lord

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No trolling

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):Nope, Thanks

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Friends

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Role-playing is acting as another being

What is metagaming?: Being 'out of character'

What is powergaming?: Not giving people time to react

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Jhoqa

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Uruks

Character’s age: 23

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): My name Jhoqa. When i was young I fought the poisonous scorpion and smashed the scurry critter with my FIST!  I like bash head with war-hammer. One time me and tribe went to fishing village and pillage. (Ok heres the story) The first time young Jhoqa was introduced to the ways of his kin was when his tribe let him come along as they raided a fishing village. After he saw the chaos and gore he never wanted out. Though he is ruthless he has a set few he cares about, and if you mess with them you mess with him. My brother is Snik Fang we lost the clan while hunting for food and now we're searching for them.  Mirdautas vras

 

 

Personality Traits: Caring, Ruthless, War machine.

Ambitions: TO EAT ALL THE MUTTON

Strengths/Talents: Good with a war-hammer. Profession bashing skulls

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Simple addition. Complex relationships. 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):  Tattoos and scars from war 360 Ibs

and 7'8 feet tall

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/5125407/war-orc/

 

Edited September 16, 2015 by Khal Jhoqa
Forgot some details :)

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

-Please dont include a link to download anything in any further applications. Such can be dangerous for application team members.

-You need to expand upon your roleplaying definitions.

-Your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions are incorrect.

-Your character's biography is incoherent, isnt really a biography, and doesnt seem to be written seriously (which is further made clear by your character's 'ambition'.

-Your character's biography is far too short.

-Your character's biography doesnt include any server lore.

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions,

 

Edited September 16, 2015 by Quavinir_Tinuvial

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.