jhoqas application [✔] [Accepted] [Pending] Jhoqa's APPLY UPDATED

[Khal Jhoqa 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Xenomorph_Lord

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No powergaming

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):Nope, Thanks

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Friends

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Creating and playing as a made-up or real life person/thing.

What is metagaming?: Using out of character information in the real game  .

Ex: Finding out someone is going to try to stab and kill your character from a friend at school then use that knowledge to your advantage .

What is powergaming?: Not giving a player enough time to react or role play while in action.

Ex: A guard captures you right away without any role play.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Jhoqa

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Uruks

Character’s age: 28

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):  I was born north of the cloud temple and right after I was born I was thrown into a pit with a poisonous scorpion, it was a long and well-fought battle between us two. In the end I was victorious. Even though I won the fight and was accepted into the Gorkil clan I felt out of place, like I needed to be with other people. At the age of five  my mother and father died in battle. I tried to act like it had no effect on me because when my other kin's family members died they acted as if it was ok, but for me it wasn't. I still grief over then today knowing that I could have saved them, knowing that if I was there I could have blocked the blows easily. There death story goes... father died by a stray arrow as he was ripping the guts out of a fisher-man my  mother on the other hand Chopping,slicing, and cutting her way through the militant until they surrounded her and she was engulfed in iron, blood, and steel. My elders told me not to fret about the death of them. That death in war was the most of noblest ways of going. Also to not to be afraid of death, Fear is not welcome in the Gorkil Clan.

12 years ago we moved from Athera to Vailor it was hard but we did it. At the age of 27 I have been attending raids since 17 years ago because of it I have became very proficient in battle. With extreme blood-lust and fast reflects I have killed more then enough to count. Who knew that my life would change a year later, I meet up with a Elf named 'Rhadamanthus' and a human with the name of 'Jason Radfort' Oh, and not to mention the ten foot tall Goliath, 'Snipfang '. We meet up in secret almost everyday to talk about the world events and adventuring. They keep offering me to come with them, that they need someone good with a ax. I just don't know my kin wouldn't take kindly to it, since most of them are don;t not like the other races. They think other races are puny and not worthy. Maybe in the next few nights ill make up my mind. For for now who knows?   

SIDE NOTE: THESE ARE MY FRIENDS, WE AGREED TO MAKE THIS STORY. Thanks -xeno 

Personality Traits: Caring, Ruthless, War machine.

Ambitions: To be accepted by your kin and a set few of your friends. To master the art of killing and weaponry. Lastly to make sure the un-dead will never come back

Strengths/Talents: One of the easiest orcs to get along with. Extremely proficient with an ax.  Strong and agile. Resistant to pain.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Not the smartest. Most of my kin hate me. Blood-lust. I also get hungry a lot 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):  Scars from self-mutilation, A tattoo of a crest blood moon, and only 9 fingers from a lost bet.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/5125407/war-orc/

Edited September 18, 2015 by Khal Jhoqa
Improving the bio

[Pureimp10 5691]

- Your biography needs to be at least 2 paragraphs long.

- The characters that you mentioned in your biography aren't notable. Unless they are characters played by friends of yours, you aren't allowed to change their story to suit your needs.

- How is it easy to get along with you, but most people still hate you? It doesn't add up.

- Your ambitions don't work, as the undead were defeated in Athera. As far as I know, they won't be back.

 

You have 24 hours to make the edits I've requested above.

 

Be sure to PM me if you have any questions, or if you've made all the appropriate edits, so I can take another look at your application!

 

Accepted!

 

Congratulations! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

Edited September 19, 2015 by Pureimp10

[Pureimp10 5691]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

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