[Denied] vemaju application

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Out-Of-Character Information

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: vemaju 

How old are you?: 16 .

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes !

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes .

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Killing anyone with no roleplay isn't allowed .

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Nuh .

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Google c;

 

Definitions

What is roleplaying?: Playing the role of a character, whatever he is real or imaginary, in a fictional environment .

What is metagaming?: It's knowing something concerning the game that your character doesn't know ( for example you play with a friend using skype and he tells you that he got killed and that's the killer is right behind you ) . 

What is powergaming?: Not giving a player enough time to react or to role play during an action .

 

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Leyk .

Character’s sex: Male .

Character’s race: Human ( Farfolk ) .

Character’s age: 19 .

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): 

My mother is a Heartlander and my father is a Farfolk, they met each other in a city of Oren's kingdom and they gave birth to me ! Unfortunately they disappeard suddenly without letting any trace when I was 15 but I managed to survive and forget about them . When I became 17, I left the house and traveled to a far village which I don't remember the name, and there I started to work as a blacksmith apprentice, it was a nice experience but it didn't last long . I left the village 2 months later and got myself lost in a huge forest ! Luckily i found a kind Orc living there who hosted me and teached me the art of the fight .

And now after two years, I'm leaving my friend to start my own adventure and maybe one day i'll become a great warrior known throughout the whole world !

Personality Traits: Calm, and self-reliant . 

Ambitions: Become a great warrior and master the art of the sword . 

Strengths/Talents: Swift and good at fighting especially sword fights .

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Very weak in water fights and has no sens of direction .

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 1.81m, 78Kg, strong body .

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere):

 

[James 425]

Your application is

You are not allowed to re-apply until 24 hours pass upon denial.

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

• Your biography isn't long enough and lacks detail. Add things on why the orc taught him, given orcs bloodthirsty nature/warlike ways. 
• Expand on your characters biography and his life growing up with this his strengths and weaknesses as well.
• Expand on the lore in your biography including continent he was born into and city within that continent from oren. You added server lore only including races. Server lore can be found here or by asking myself. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Front+Page

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM!

Note: Well done on your definitions. 

Edited October 14, 2015 by James

[James 425]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.